Wednesday, November 8, 2023
Welcome, all and happy hump day. As I persisted in futile attempts to get my head back into the universe of Atonement, TN, I decided to do another “Artifacts” post. Update: this actually did help. Last evening I sketched out the opening scenes for part-2 of the new serial. I hope to be back on track with weekend episodes soon.
Over the course of part-1 of the serial, I mentioned the properties of a special barber pole. One of those was only a potential, about which Honeybell speculated.
If the barber pole rotates clockwise, then it adds to the magical protections surrounding the town. However, what happens if someone makes it rotate counterclockwise? That’s what our porcine heroes questioned. Read on to learn (or remember) what I mean.
Artifact Notes: The Barber Pole
Thanks to GP Cox for the group of 3 Reader Things that included “barber pole” early in the serial. Click here for that episode.
From Atonement in Zugzwang, Book 1, Chapter 10
“You’re doing more than that, little pig. You know you can’t hide things from me,” Bheema went on undeterred as he admonished Moccus, the otherworldly pig. “Salty’s antiques — the barber pole is missing. You know how dangerous that artifact is! If the wrong entities get possession of it…”
Two other pigs secreted themselves to spy on their friend, and their concern that Moccus was in trouble was validated. A soft gasp escaped Honeybell’s snout. She motioned for Deme to back away. Deme tried to speak after a moment, but Honeybell shushed her until they were well away from Bheema and Moccus.
“Honeybell, what’s the matter? What’s the big deal about a barber’s pole?” Deme demanded when they stopped for breath.
“You know old Salty Riley was a little… looney, don’t you?” Honeybell began, and Deme nodded. “I heard that he didn’t get that way until he came into possession of that particular barber’s pole. It’s not an ordinary antique. In fact, it’s at least as dangerous as the most powerful of the artifacts the Metatron family has gathered.”
“Honeybell, I know that Atonement, Tennessee is not only a place where supernaturals and humans are drawn so they can atone. It’s also a safe repository for objects of power,” Deme asserted. “But what’s that got to do with a barber pole?”
“You know that it revolves, don’t you, Deme?” her companion asked, and Deme gave a soft snort because Honeybell was breaking down the explanation too far.
“I know barber poles rotate, making those stripes look like they’re spiraling,” Deme snorted and stated impatiently.
Her friend gave Deme a narrow glare and a grunting snort before continuing.
“When this barber’s pole rotates clockwise, it renews the protective magic that surrounds Atonement. That magic is also what prevents the especially harmful races of supernatural beings from entering this town,” Honeybell paused to make sure Deme was listening. “However, if the pole is made to rotate counterclockwise, it creates an opening in the protective circle.”
Deme gave a hoarse gasp. Honeybell nodded sagely.
“Evil creatures could get inside Atonement! What if they got the artifacts stored here?” Deme exclaimed.
“Combine the powers of certain supernaturals with the magic of the barber pole and it could do much more harm that simply allowing evil creatures to get to the powerful artifacts. Although it’s very unlikely, there is a possibility that time itself could be corrupted,” she paused at Deme’s skeptical snort. “Regardless, it is certain — not just a potential, that Atonement would become something evil. Worse that dark magic could pull into its sphere of evil all the inhabitants of Atonement,” Honeybell declared.
From Atonement in Zugzwang, Book 1, Chapter 15
Moccus was within sight of the erstwhile scrap metal refinery. In modern days it had been remodeled as a country-western bar called the Rowdy Rooster. He paused, looking at the building. Even at that distance, he could feel the tension that emanated from the place. Moccus snorted when a pang of fear poked him.
Inside the bar’s basement, Moccus narrowly escaped Old Green Eyes. He figured out that the barber pole was inside a grandfather clock, which he deftly opened.
The barber pole — yes! he thought. But I’ll never be able to carry it alone. I wish Deme was here. No, no I don’t wish that at all. This is much too dangerous to involve her. If anything happened to Deme—.
His twisty tail wriggled anxiously as he considered how to proceed.
The orb. I can manage a ball that size. If I take the orb, they won’t be able to use the power of the barber pole. But no… I might ruin the whole artifact if I remove the orb… Still that would be better than Green Eyes and his master getting the power of the artifact.
Glowing in the darkness of the basement, Moccus made short work of disconnecting the orb. Its radiance was considerably brighter than that of the otherworldly pigs. He wrapped it in a handkerchief, which dampened the luminosity and helped him carry the orb.
Moccus skuttled away, running faster than his hooves had ever carried him.
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Will the barber pole’s potential power to shift time become a fact? That honestly might cause more complications than I can deal with… but it’s fun to ponder.
You can read my urban fantasy serial, “Atonement in Zugzwang” in book form. The e-book is searchable, which makes it a great way to look for specific reminders. Thanks for visiting. Friendly comments are encouraged. Hugs!
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Also in Spanish, translated by Olga Núñez Miret! The title for the Spanish-speaking market is Expiación y Magia
Atonement in Bloom
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Such a fantastic blend of whimsy and suspense!
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Thanks very much, JoAnna. It’s nice to see you. Hugs.
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Atonement is interesting and a lot of fun 🤣😎🙃
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I’m so glad you think so — thank you. Have a good rest of the week. Hugs.
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That was fab. Reading the excerpt brought everything back.
Teagan, I’m so looking forward to the second half!
Thank you for all you do! Don’t forget to let me know when you might need another drawing. I just need a bit of lead time!
Hugs!
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Thanks, Resa, I’m happy you enjoyed this. Oh, another drawing would be fabulous! That’s so generous of you. I need to get enough of my story to have an event and a character in my head for your drawing, and I will certainly take you up on that. Big hugs.
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Hi Teagan, the turning barber’s pole is a great idea. I look forward to seeing what you do with it a lovely recap from book 1.
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Hi, Robbie. How are you holding up? I hope Michael is improving.
It won’t really be a recap — just part of the post that (combined with the two excerpts here) have the most relevant details to the start of Part-2.
I keep bouncing around about just how to begin. Every time I think I have it all sorted, I realize that I don’t! LOL. Yesterday I realized that the things that are in my way have not yet been written, so I can “easily” change them. But they’re pretty well rooted in my head. Sometimes talking out loud about it helps, even if the other person is not an author. A friend is supposed to call today to let me do that. Maybe it will help… maybe not. Have a good rest of the week. Hugs.
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I love how your mind works. And the first picture here is stunning!
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Thanks so much, Tandy. Haha, the computer generated images take a ton of trial and error, changing the text I enter, selecting different filters… and they usually still send back something bizarre. After about 30 tries, I got that one, which was fairly close to what I had in mind. Hugs.
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Even better the second time! (K)
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That’s such a lovely thing to say, Kerfe — thank you. Hugs.
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I love the glowing pigs, Teagan. I look forward to the second half.
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Thanks so much, Dan. I’ve been working on a scene that has Moccus kicking off Part-2. Although my vision of that scene keeps changing…
Big hugs.
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😊🐷
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The best part about this review of the artifact is it spurred something in you to sketch out some ideas for book two. Good job, Teagan.
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Thanks for your encouragement, John. Another refresher on Saturday, and hopefully I’ll have my head far enough into Atonement, TN to start the serial. Hugs.
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Yay.
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Thanks for sharing this again, Teagan and I love the concept of the Barber’s Pole and its magical role.
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Thank you kindly, Jan. It’s both fun and satisfying when a “reader thing” becomes a magic artifact. Hugs.
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I’m glad to hear that your writing mojo is getting back on track!
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LOL. The rails are shaky though Liz. Hugs.
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🙂
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I’m so happy you were inspired, Teagan! I like how the Barbers Pole plays a role in the story. Huge hugs xo
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Thanks for your encouragement, Denise. The barber pole started early in the serial. I just now had to go through all my stuff so I could revise this post to include the person who gave it as a reader thing — GP Cox. Now if I can stay inspired. I resolved one “question” that’s been a stalling point for me — what chess piece is Enoch. BUT that makes the issue of “Castling” which requires moving the king and the rook together. Enoch can’t be the king. Maybe the simplest thing is to ditch “Atonement Castled” as the title. Hugs winging back to you. ❤
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We can’t force inspiration, but I love it when it finally just clicks! Hugs
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When it finally strikes, Velma apparently hears it and starts meowing for attention… LOL.
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Lol
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Your imagination knows no end, Teagan. That barber pole is powerful and time travel would be coo cool, but you’re right that it could add a whole level of complication. Great excerpts and Happy Writing.
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Thanks, Diana. This story already has a few layers. So I do hesitate. Serials are hard for most readers to absorb as it is. Complicating them is not a great idea. Perhaps if the time shift is very, very small…
Take care and hugs.
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🙂
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The mystery of a barber’s pole solved! Rowdy Rooster! So clever!
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Thanks for visiting, Jan. That was only a review of the groundwork for that mystery. See you at the Rowdy Rooster. LOL. Hugs.
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The barber pole was a brilliant idea for this story!
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Indeed it was, Noelle, but I can’t take that credit. I revised the post to include a thank you to GP Cox who left it as a reader thing early on. Big hugs.
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Ah but you ran with it!
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Love the reminder. Pigs rule!
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LOL. Thanks for visiting, Pat. One more reminder on Saturday. Then Moccus will lead off Part-2. Hugs
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Looking forward to that. Like the pigs trit on.
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I’m so glad you shared this again!!
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Thank you kindly, Jennie. Hugs.
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You’re welcome, Teagan. Hugs! 💕
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Love the CGI.
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This afternoon I was trying to make one for Veterans Day. The CGI does not do well with our flag… and it gave me some truly weird jets. LOL. Hugs.
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I can imagine.
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Yes, I also remember it. I like barber poles as objects, but this one… I wonder what will happen when we see it next! Thanks, Teagan, and good luck!
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Good question, Olga. I’m thinking there’s more than one kind of “barber pole” in this story. Particularly the way that green aurora kept forming a rotating column… 😉 Big hugs.
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Thank you for reviewing. Of course I remember the barber pole, but it also refreshed my view of the pigs!
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I’m such a slacker, GP… I had to look up who gave me that reader thing, and it was you! I’ve revised this post to include a thank you, and links to your blog as well as that early episode of the serial. Big hugs!
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Thank you so much. You have had so many people involved in the story, there’s no doubt you forget one or two things!
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great story of the barber pole and those cute little images of the piggies. Great book.
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Thanks, Cindy. One more refresher on Saturday, then I plan to start the new serial. Hugs.
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