Jazz Age Wednesdays 13 ― Pip and the River Monster

Wednesday, December 6, 2017

Hey Sheiks and Shebas,  I’m pos-i-lutely happy to see you at Jazz Age Wednesdays again! 

Early Lucille 3 copy
Young Lucille Ball

I started this short story back when I did a collaborative post with author John W. Howell*.  The three things driving that story were “Counterfeiting, Time, and Hollywood.” The ultimate result was In the Pip of Time, which you saw here

Like I was saying, that was when this story started, but not when I finished it.  I was having one of moments when the many characters I’ve written cross the boundaries of their stories.  Cornelis Drebbel (of Copper, the Alchemist, and the Woman in Trousers) popped into the short story I was trying to write…  I couldn’t make the story go where the “things” needed to take it — at least not at that time.  (Applesauce! If that sounds like a lot of bushwa to ya’ll, then all I can say is that’s part of how my brain is just wired wrong.)

I’ll stop beating my gums and say that for this post, I went back to that derailed beginning to finish the story.

Pip and the River Monster

Savannah GA Isle of Hope circa 1930
Isle of Hope, Savannah GA circa 1930

Sunlight glittered on the calm Savannah River.  My friend Alastair helped me down from his truck.  The vehicle had a sign proclaiming “You’re always right with Wongs!  Wong’s Chinese Restaurant.” I had been joking when I gave him that as a slogan for his family business.  I shook my head.

Arabella Wong’s birthday was coming up and Alastair planned a party for her.  I remembered the riverside park from childhood when Pops brought me to visit Granny Phanny.  I wanted to see if Alastair liked it as a venue for his mom’s party.

A gust of wind nearly took my pink cloche hat.  I shoved it firmly onto my head.  Maybe it was a blustery day, but it was still beautiful.  We both jumped at a bright flash of light and a crack of thunder.  A fisherman still carrying his rod and reel pushed past us.

Alastair caught the man’s arm, asking him what was wrong.

“River monster!” the fisherman gasped.  “No time to explain.  You kids will beat it, if you know what’s good for you!” the man cried as he pulled free of Alastair’s grip.

Sea Monster man woman Jean-Marc Côté 1900
Jean-Marc Côté circa 1900

My buddy Alastair was more excited than afraid.  His eyes twinkled as he looked expectantly at the Savannah River.  I however, took a step backward.  Alastair gave me an encouraging pat on the shoulder.

“Don’t worry, flapper.  It’s probably a dolphin.  You know this end of the river is close to the ocean.  Hey!  This has been a warm year, and Florida is not that far away.  It might even be a manatee!” Alastair exclaimed.

Alastair looked at the back of the departing fisherman and chuckled.  I looked at him and hoped he wasn’t a whole heap smarter than us!

We turned back to the river.  A faint purplish glow bathed the area at the shore.  I saw something rise from the water that looked like the head of a huge snake.  I slapped my hand over my mouth to hold back a scream.

Something huge slowly rose from the river.  Alastair stopped smiling.

“Horsefeathers!  That’s no manatee,” he muttered.  “What the Sam Hill is it?”

I tilted my head to one side, suddenly more curious than fearful.

“Alastair…  I’ve seen pictures,” I began hesitantly because I was stunned.  “That looks like an old submarine,” I finished as the thing rose higher out of the water.

It moved right up to the pier.  Water poured down as a hatch opened.  A man with unkempt blonde hair and bushy eyebrows stuck his head out from the hatch.  He waved to Alastair and me.  That’s when things really got strange.

Drebbel stamp
Cornelis Drebble, “Pioneers of Sea Transport” stamp, 2008


“Ah-ha!  Mr. Wong!  I wondered why I was drawn to this place.  It’s good to see you, old boy!” the strange man called.

Then he levitated up from the submarine’s hatch and over to the pier.  Honest!  That’s really what happened.

I heard a squeak and a gasp.  I wasn’t sure which sound came from Alastair and which came from me.  I grabbed his arm, although I wasn’t sure whether it was to keep him from running, or to anchor myself.

“Wong,” the stranger began as he walked up to us.

He stopped abruptly.  He looked at the shores of the river.  He sniffed the air.

“This is not Hong Kong,” he stated and then looked closely at Alastair.  “And you sir, are not the right Wong.”

With a perplexed expression he turned his gaze to me.  He took in my bobbed hair.  Then he looked at my fashionably short, but still perfectly proper skirt.  In fact, his peepers paused a little too long at my gams.

“And based on your attire, this is far from the correct era,” he added.

However, another look at Alastair seemed to settle his mind.

“I apologize for my lack of manners,” the odd man went on.  “Allow me to introduce myself.  I’m Cornelis Drebbel, alchemist.  Young man, your grandfather’s grandfather once was the holder of my skull.”

There was another louder squeak, and that time I’m pretty sure it came from me.

“Sk-k-k skull?” Alastair queried.

The man, Cornelis Drebbel looked at each of us, and then smirked.

“Well now, you didn’t think I was ordinary, did you?  If my arrival in a submarine was not enough, after I levitated out of the vessel, you must have realized something.  Maybe you didn’t,” he finished drolly.

I can’t begin to describe how the conversation progressed from that point.  However, we found ourselves sitting on a blanket and drinking coffee from the thermos I had brought.  Cornelis tried to explain the alchemy that connected him to Alastair’s ancestor, and how it brought him to Savannah, Georgia.  I admit most of that went right over my head, but apparently that family tree drew him to Alastair.

After a while he wanted to know more about us.  I told him how we happened to be at the pier, to see if it would be a good place for a birthday party for Alastair’s mom.

The alchemist’s eyes lit up.  He clapped his hands together and grinned.

“I have the perfect place!” he exclaimed.  “How about a river cruise?”

“A riverboat party would be the cat’s meow, but it would cost more mazuma than I see in a year,” Alastair said regretfully.

“Oh, dear boy, tsk-tsk.  I don’t mean a riverboat.  I meant my submarine!” he chortled.  “I’d love to meet your immediate family and give you a tour.  It’s not often I get to meet the descendants of one of the keepers of my skull.”

Unfortunately, Alastair and I couldn’t talk much about it later.  We had to pass it off to Alastair’s family as Hollywood type special effects.  Yet it was pos-i-lutely the most memorable birthday party I ever attended.

The End


After the amazingly talented Adele Marie Park asked to know more about my Cornelis Drebbel character, I decided to share a link to the old serial where he was “born” so to speak.  Here is episode one of that “three things” style steampunk series: https://teagansbooks.com/2015/01/17/new-interactive-serial-episode-1/ 

Thanks for visiting.  You really are the cat’s pajamas!

PS:  Of course, I have to show you the links to the books about Pip and her friends.

Bijou front only 2

Murder at the Bijou — Three Ingredients I

Novel-book-The Three Things Serial Story-Teagan Riordain Geneviene-The Writer Next Door-Vashti Q-spotlight-author

The Three Things Serial Story: A Little 1920s Story Kindle 



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74 thoughts on “Jazz Age Wednesdays 13 ― Pip and the River Monster

    1. Christy, it’s good to see you. I couldn’t agree more about the positivity that greeted Cornelis for this story. I had my doubts about posting it, but I’m so glad everyone enjoyed it. Have a wonderful week. You’re the cat’s pajamas!

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    1. Hi Jennie. They had such fabulous slang in the 1920s! One day I’ll publish the list of words (and meanings) I’ve collected. There are some fun ones from the Victorian Era, but to me there’s nothing like the words from the 20s. Thanks so much for taking time to read and comment. You’re the cat’s pajamas!

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      1. You are so right! They were the best. I think the break from the Victorian age to the 20’s was huge. Much bigger than the ‘60’s break into blue jeans and long hair. I root for the 20’s! When I was a child at summer camp, many of the songs we sang (that hadn’t changed in decades) included that fun slang. “Shave and a haircut, two bits.” Happy week ahead, Teagan.

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  1. As always you blow me away…..I think I have told you before that Savannah is one of my favourite American cities…especially when it’s not too hot. I so love your inventiveness, imagination….everything about your wonderfully magical mind. Sending hummingbirds to you and Crystal for the weekend. Janet xxx

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    1. It’s a joy to see you Janet. Your affection for Savannah had slipped my mind, but now you mention it, yes, I remember. 🙂 I’m pleased as punch that you enjoyed this story.
      It’s my every-other-Friday off (of course that means next week is a 44 hour workweek but…), so Crystal is contentedly snoozing beside me on the electric throw. 🐱
      I loved your post and paintings today about Christeve! https://jcrhumming.wordpress.com/2017/12/07/a-christmas-story-about-a-homeless-little-cat-and-how-she-found-hope-trust-and-courage/
      I hope everyone will visit it. Hummingbird hugs!


    1. Hi Kathryn. It’s great to see you. Very time I see your smiling face one of the things I think of is peppers — which is good on this warm day. But I also think of your delicious food. I’m hungry… How long til lunch? o_O
      I sincerely appreciate the feedback in your comment. I wasn’t sure if this story worked at all, but you called it a favorite! Yippee! Huge thanks for taking time to visit. You’re the cat’s meow!

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  2. This made me feel like I was drinking giggle water straight from a bathtub, thanks darling dearest Teagan, you really are the bee’s knees!!!
    Off to share in the hopes that others will follow the blogging breadcrumb trail back to your cat’s pajamas blog and books, my fellow Bearcat!!!
    Hope this week is being the cat’s meow to you, delightful friend (if not I shall have to have a severe talking to it).
    Mega “And you sir, are not the right Wong.” hugs xoxox

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    1. Tee-hee! Hey Sheba! I’m glad you got a giggle from that line, Donna — because I couldn’t resist writing it! 😀
      I’ll say one thing for this week… it’s been different (kind of). Thanks so very much for taking time to comment. I so enjoy your visits. Great big hug, you bearcat!

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    1. OMG, a reblog? I really did make it over the midweek hump now, Jacquie! Thanks so much. You’re so kind. The way I look at fantasy and imagination is — there are no limits! I wasn’t sure if this story would work (outside of my own miss-wired head anyhow), so thank you even more. You’re the cat’s pajamas!

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    1. Hi Adele — it’s great to see you! Cornelis came along before I knew you. It was a serial “Copper, the Alchemist, and the Woman in Trousers,” Cornelis being the Alchemist. https://teagansbooks.com/2015/01/17/new-interactive-serial-episode-1/
      He wriggles his bushy blonde eyebrows into somebody else’s story every now and then. 😉
      Thanks for visiting, Adele — and huge thanks for reblogging. You’re the cat’s pajamas!

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        1. My pleasure, Adele. Cornelis stars in my NaNoWriMo book this year… But after I found my plot had been done (and in fine detail…) I derailed. I made my word-count to finish, but the draft is meandering crap. One day he’ll have this new novel. One day. Hugs!

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    1. You are so kind to say that Diana. I really had my doubts about this episode. But with NaNoWriMo, the Cornelis character was already in my head, so I wanted to try and finish the story. I appreciate you taking time to visit. You’re the cat’s meow!

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    1. LOL! Dear Ape — you are a riot. I won’t even try to answer that.
      You know… I never understood why Pip and Alastair never became a couple — because I always had a secret crush on him… or them… or rather both Alastairs.
      Many thanks for reblogging! Mega hugs.

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    1. Dear Olga, thank you for making me smile with these encouraging words!
      It’s “hump day” and hell or high water, I will make it over that midweek hump… Unfortunately the workday began in a frustrating way. But that’s typical. So the hump is as high as always, and your encouragement is needed more than ever. You’re the cat’s pajamas!


    1. Tee-hee! Thanks for this feedback, Fraggle. I didn’t know if I did enough with this little story to bring out the character of Cornelis. He has been one of my favorite personalities to write. I’m glad to know he has a friend in you. You’re the bee’s knees!

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    1. Gerlinde, you are so kind. Thank you for these encouraging words. Are you still in Germany? Either way, I appreciate you taking time to visit here. I’ve been enjoying seeing your wonderful recipe posts on Facebook. Huge hugs right back. 🙂


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