Saturday, October 10, 2020
Welcome to my sanctuary — a safe haven from politics, religion, and all the hard happenings of the current day and age. The steampunk riverboat is here, my chuckaboos! I’m happy to see you. Heartfelt thanks to everyone who visited, hosted, and supported the launch of Hullaba Lulu, a Dieselpunk Adventure. You’re all pos-i-lutely the cat’s pajamas!
Background of the Storytelling
Bloggers come and go — it seems like a lot of them go. Sometimes they gradually fade away. Others leave abruptly. Either way, most of the time we never know why. Early in my blogging career there was a bright young woman who followed my first serials, and I followed her blog. She happened to be a lesbian and asked me if I would please write such a heroine. If you’ve been around me, you know that I almost always write from the point of view of a straight woman (of one age or another). That’s because I feel I can’t give a genuine portrayal of anyone else. “Write what you know.”
However, that she would ask me to write a particular kind of character touched my heart. Years later, even though she dropped out of the blogosphere, I still felt sad that I couldn’t give her the heroine she requested. That was in my mind when I brought “the governess and her charge” into The Delta Pearl. Alex/Alison and Azalea created a small subplot in the story which also touches on the way women were regarded during the steam era. The resolution of their story was part of the original ending of this novel. As I added to the story with this serial, Alison and Azalea became a subplot, which will be resolved before the new ending of this re-write.
Thanks to Dan Antion for letting me use so many of his photographs throughout this voyage on the river. Very early in this voyage Maggie gave us this chapter’s “random reader thing,” bucket. Thanks to Dan Antion for providing some of the photos for this episode.
All aboard!
The Delta Pearl
Chapter 51 — Jump
While the riverboat vibrated, the Cook bustled past us. She herded Azalea and Alison as she went. I wondered what Agate planned for the young women. Furthermore, I wondered why she had taken an interest at all. Although, she did tend to stick her little bazoo into relationships, and was dreadfully fond of matchmaking.
As Agate and the young women left the area, I got a glimpse of the Captain at the top of the stairs. He nodded to the Cook. There was an unspoken exchange between the two of them. Agate shooed her charges through the double doors. When my gaze returned to the top of the stairs, the Captain was already gone.
In no time Agate had figured out the girls were disguised. However, I hoped she just had some uncanny ability for that sort of thing. I had hoped the Captain would not take time to notice anything off kilter about the pair. Even so, it seemed like he, at least eventually, knew about it as well.
If the two had traveled on any other boat, ship, or train, the person in charge would have felt not just within his rights, but duty bound to eject the same-sex lovers on the spot. A runaway wife would almost as likely get similar treatment. Azalea and Alison were both those things.
Could the Captain really be upset about the runaway wife, or their sexual proclivities? I had never known Cecil Perlog to be judgmental or prejudiced in any way. However, I couldn’t help wondering if he intended to put them off the riverboat at our next stop.
Not only that, but what would our next stop be? A temporal rift? Surely no discretion could warrant abandoning them not just in a strange place, but an unknown time as well!
The unfortunate image of a police officers and hysterics when Eliza distracted the authorities from the two women leapt to my mind. Mrs. Needleman landed in jail, just for swimming in her undergarments. The police would not be any more sympathetic to Azalea and Alison. The idea of Alison being forced to go back to a horrible marriage dismayed me. Adding the fact that should her preference for other women be brought out, seemed the lesser issue to me, but I realized that if the gossip papers got the information, they would run wild with it. That thought was annoying enough. However, in some places she and Azalea could be jailed for their relationship. That was terribly unfair.
“Ah! There’s the great man now,” Victor exclaimed, still determined to offer his help. “Or rather there he was. My, for a man of such stature, he moves quickly.”
Victor moved toward the stairs as if he meant to seek out the Captain. I caught his arm in a tight grip. The inventor turned back to me, wearing a startled expression. He seemed to sober when he finally took in the fierce look on my face.
“Is it really such a secret, then?” he began, but my reply was a mute stare. “Spontaneously traveling in time… Well, yes. I suppose it would be at that. I certainly couldn’t risk certain people learning about my inventions before I was ready to make them public. For instance, I would never let someone like Benjamin Dundas know the details of my work or even my research,” he added, his voice taking on a distracted tone.
I had given little thought to the tall, standoffish passenger since I greeted everyone at their boarding. However, when we spotted him angrily leaving a disreputable jewelry seller during our shore trip in Cairo, Illinois, I became distrustful of the man. Besides, the way his mustache grew into his bushy sideburns made me cringe. However, I wondered why Victor Elam would mention him with suspicion.
“Are you in the same field? Associates? Rivals perhaps? I had never heard of the man before I saw his name on the manifest,” I asked feeling uneasy.
The inventor snorted contemptuously.
“Friends? Certainly not. The man is a troll. He skulks about and steals inventions and ideas. Then he makes them public and takes credit for them. He’s even managed to get the patents for many of the inventions that he stole,” Victor stated.
I realized that he was looking over my shoulder rather than at me. His gaze was directed to the glass double doors that let out to the deck.
“By the way,” he added. “Didn’t you say that no one was to be allowed outside?”
I was aghast to see a tall man wearing a loose-fitting overcoat. He had a lot of unappealing facial hair.
“Speak of the devil! That’s Benjamin Dundas!” Victor exclaimed
At the top of the stairs I saw the Mate walking by, talking urgently to Obsidian Durango, the Cadet.
“Blue, Sid!” I cried up to them. “Passenger outside!” I called, pointing toward Dundas.
The two men glanced at one another. The Cadet headed down the stairs at a run. To my surprise, Blue John Boulton hopped onto the polished mahogany stair rail and slid down the banister. He hit the ground running. Out the door the Mate went, shouting at Dundas. Sid was a moment behind the Mate. They rushed out to the deck.
The Dealer’s ominous warning that the passenger would be safe ― as long as they stayed inside had not left my mind. It wasn’t so much his words as it was the way he spoke them.
If the passengers would be in danger outside, then wouldn’t the crew also be in peril?
The man saw Blue John and Sid moving toward him. Dundas clearly had some unsavory purpose in mind because he took off at a run. He stumbled over a bucket, but kept going.
Fortunately, the pail was empty, but it caused Sid to stumble. Blue caught his arm so that he didn’t fall. Then they careened after Dundas at full speed.
Benjamin Dundas tore the ring-shaped buoy free from its position. The flotation device was meant to be thrown to anyone who accidentally fell overboard. I was horrified when Dundas climbed atop the rail and jumped!
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End Chapter 51
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Thanks again to everyone how has visited and participated in the launch of Hullaba Lulu, a Dieselpunk Adventure. The fun is only just getting started.
Robbie Cheadle who also did a wonderful review. Click for the review.
Still to come
Sunday October 11, I’ll be in California chatting about 1920s styles with Valentina Cirasola.
Monday, October 19, I’m in Kentucky for Teri Polen’s festival, Bad Moon Rising. I didn’t bring Lulu, but she came by herself.
Purchase Links
Throughout October, Hullaba Lulu is at an introductory price. The eBooks are only 99¢. For those who boycott Amazon I made a Kobo eBook too.
Kindle: Click this universal link
Paperback: Click this universal link
Kobo: https://www.kobo.com/us/en/ebook/hullaba-lulu
Be well, be happy, my chuckaboos.
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This serial is made possible in spite of (not because of) the deplorable lack of Internet service from TDS Telecom. They are even worse than the government about claiming no problem exists in the face of failure. TDS Telecom meets every complaint and service call by saying they find no problem. Their technicians come to my home and refuse to do any work or replace equipment, even when their offsite managers have instructed them to do so. They brought equipment that they openly state does not work properly. They refuse to let me talk to a manager. They refuse to promise to send someone other than the previous do-nothing tech. They refuse to make sure the technicians have working hardware with them. My letters, emails, and tweets go unanswered. Dear readers, please do not comment here in response to this paragraph. Just be aware of my awful experience with this so called provider.
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Hmmm, I wonder what he’s up to then and what implications that will have in a time shift! I think you did a great job for your friend in creating an interesting lesbian couple.
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It’s funny, Andrea. She wasn’t a close blogger-friend, but I sometimes wonder about bloggers-past. Her request touched my heart, although the couple falls short of being a main character. , Even though she faded from the blog scene long before I started work on the Delta Pearl, I wanted to do something. Alison and Azalea will be back. Thanks for reading and commenting, my chuckaboo!
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I’m so late getting here! It’s wonderful you created these characters with your blogging friend in mind. I hope she’s able to read this story, Teagan.
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Who knows, Teri. For some reason that stuck with me long after that blogger faded away. It’s not as good as writing a lead character, but these two minor characters stretched me outside my comfort zone. I try to portray them respectfully, but with fun. Writing is never a social commentary with me. Oh, and there’s no such thing as late here, my chuckaboo! 🙂
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…. and that’s what you do so well! – casually introduce us to characters who later come back at us when we least expect it!
And what the hell?! What did Victor just admit to? Did I miss something?! More, Teagan, I need more of this story!!
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Hi Joanne, it’s good to see you.
Victor didn’t make an admission. He’s just putting down Dundas. And over-eager to help — and so get involved with what he sees as a delicious scientific discovery (that being the temporal shift). Have a good rest of the week, my chuckaboo!
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Thanks Teagan for the clarification. I read that section several times wondering if it said what I thought it said! Victor is kind of like a puppy with a new toy 🙂
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Well, that means there is something wrong with the writing. So I need to reconsider that passage before a final edit and “bookizing” the story. Thanks, Joanne.
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Oh, no!! He jumped into the river? I’d nearly forgotten about this unsavory character. Excellent episode, Teagan!
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I’m tickled pink to see you, Jennie. Yes, Dundas the patent troll. (I didn’t realize there was such a thing until I went to work for the Patent & Trademark Office — people on the lookout for brilliant ideas, then they snatch them up and rush to get the patent before the real inventor.)
Yes, re the characters. That’s the trouble with short episodes — I can’t keep all the characters at the forefront. I guess a long serial like this should only have a couple of characters. But the true purpose of this one is to let me re-write a novel that didn’t satisfy me. Thanks for reading and commenting, my chuckaboo!
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The patent troll. What a brilliant description! Actually I love the short episodes, because there are so many characters that come into play. When one, like Dundas, comes about again, it adds more beef to the stew. That means long serials are better, richer, deeper. All the characters don’t need to be in the forefront. That’s exactly what is happening in your story, Teagan. That’s why it is holding readers like me captive. Really! Thank you. ❤️
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You’ve made my week, my chuckaboo!
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I’m so glad! 😀
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I’ve been away for a few days and just now catching up on all the blogs. Wow! This one left me in a lurch. What is going to happen to the man jumping not only from the boat but in a temporal time shift! Talk about a cliffhanger. Another great segment, Teagan!
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Hi Jan, I hope your week is off to a great start. Thanks for reading and commenting, my chuckaboo!
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I love hearing your voice through your words, Teagan. There is a compassionate thread that weaves in and out of your turbulent, exciting story line. Brilliant introduction! You hold us safe with your magic words and entice us to go where we never thought we would…
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Hi Rebecca. Heartfelt thanks for your kind words. That is wonderful feedback, that I hadn’t considered. Thank you! Next time we’ll see what happens after Dundas hits the river. 😉 I’m glad you’re on this riverboat, my chuckaboo!
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Another cliff hanger ending, Teagan. Well, actually, there are two unknowns now and a whole week to wait for the next episode. Thanks for the shout out. I loved having you over as a guest.
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Dear Robbie, thanks again for hosting me with Lulu.
Yes, that paddlewheel is spinning pretty fast now. Hang onto your hat, my chuckaboo!
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An interesting turn of events, Benjamin jumping into a different time, perhaps to steal future inventions?
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Well, he’s an idea-stealer, Lavinia. Although going back with them might present a problem. Then again, around here, you never know. 😉 LOL. Thanks for taking time to catch up, my chuckaboo!
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Thank you for a little bit drama inside, Teagan! Will be interesting what will happen next. Have a beautiful weekend! Michael
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It’s good to see you, Michael. I hope all is well. I’m happy you enjoyed the introduction and the chapter. Wishing you a wonderful new week, my chuckaboo!
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Thank you Teagan! The little bit drama in the sequel was amazing, even there is much trouble in the real world too.Better only to read about. Hope you are well too, and have a great weekend! Best wishes, Michael
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High drama on deck and off! 🙂 Love your serials, Teagan. xo
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Hey Bette! More to come next time. I’m so happy you enjoyed this, my chuckaboo!
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That was exciting! I’ll be on board next week to find out what happens after the jump! Have a lovely week-end, Teagan. 😀😀
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It’s great to see you, Deborah. I’m so happy you enjoyed it. Happy weekend, my chuckaboo!
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Great episode….I was wondering who would end up outside and next up….what the heck happens to him now that he has jumped ship!! Love your creativity!!
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I’m delighted you enjoyed it, Kirt. More on that next time! 😉 Thanks for reading and commenting, my chuckaboo!
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Very neat episode, Teagan!
I like that Dundas jumped into the river.
Lots of action outside, when we should stay inside!
I’d like to add that your Hullaba Lulu book launch was a unique a fab experience for me.
Cat’s Pyjama’s!
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Hey Resa. Thanks for your support about Lulu’s launch. It has been a wild ride. Yes, now what for Dundas? We’ll see next time. I appreciate you reading and commenting, my chuckaboo!
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Adore your work, Teagan!
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My goodness. I wanted the mate to catch him before he could do that. I guess the title of the episode should have been the tip-off that that was not going to happen. Well done, Teagan.
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Ha! I didn’t think about it that way, John. I’ve been using one-word titles, a verb, and where possible I use a verb that might also be a noun. I was just looking for such a word that went with the chapter. But it ain’t over until *I* sing, so tune in text weekend. 😉 Thanks for being on this riverboat, my chuckaboo!
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My pleasure, Teagan.
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What an ending this week! So much going on, and I can’t wait for the next installment. Hugs
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Denise. I’ll look forward to meeting you at the riverbank next weekend, my chuckaboo!
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What a sweet introduction to this episode, Teagan. And an exciting episode. I wonder what Dundas is up to! And does he even realize the peril he might be in? Can’t wait to see what happens next. 🙂
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Thank you, Diana. It was a way of honoring the request as best I could, if not truly doing what was asked. Wishing you huge success with Allies and Spies!
Thanks for reading and commenting, my chuckaboo!
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Ha. You’re so fun. My pleasure.
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Oh no! Escapee! Not knowing the time they are in, I hope Dundas is not able to get away and take advantage. It would most likely be perilous to the ship and crew. What’s going to happen next, Teagan?
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Ah… we shall see, my chuckaboo. We shall see. 😉 Sending you huge hugs, Mary J.
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Living on the edge and leaving us on the edge.
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Good thing there’s a railing. 😀 Hang on tight, my chuckaboo! There’s more to come.
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This cliffhanger is a doozy. I can only up that Dundas ends up in some well deserved wretched predicament–may be an unpaid servant to the bratty child from earlier chapters. One can hear the caterwauling from here. 🙂
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Hahaha! A very Dante-esque punishment, Pat. I love it. Thanks for reading and commenting, my chuckaboo!
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That was an exciting chase. I didn’t expect that last line. What was Dundas thinking?
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Priscilla, you gave me a big grin if I surprised you. Thanks for reading and commenting, my chuckaboo!
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Fortunately, I can rely on you for him to get his just desserts.
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Good grief Teagan, you’re killing me with yet another cliff hanger!! Mr. Dundas is a mystery indeed. Anxious for next Saturday’s edition. Here I thought being on the Delta Pearl would be a leisurely trip. Boy! Was I wrong.
Ginger
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LOL. I’m a “cliffhanger maven,” Ginger. I can’t help myself. 😉 There might be some rapids in the river ahead. So, hang on tight. I’m happy you enjoyed this chapter, my chuckaboo!
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Once again, Teagan, how do you do it? I can’t get enough of the Delta Pearl!! Every week I wonder what kind of mischief or trouble will arise and what clue might you leave behind for us…..
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GP, that’s music to my ears. I did sort of leave some clues here… or at least reminders of the groundwork I laid many weeks ago for something that’s coming soon. Have a wonderful week ahead, my chuckaboo!
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Will do, Chickadee.
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You have brought us to the edge of another cliff, Teagan, but one of us, well, one of them has gone over. I can only imagine the harm Mr. Dundas can cause in another time.
I liked your introduction today. The issues you are weaving into this story were and remain important. To include them gives them some of the recognition they deserve.
I also like the interaction between members of the crew. Whether verbal or silent glances, they communicate and work as one. You’re showing us a group of people who are so much more than people doing a job.
Great job! I can hardly wait for the next episode. I hope you have a nice weekend.
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Thanks for your terrific feedback, Dan — particularly about the crew. I do see all the crew as… individual cells within a single organism, and the organism is the Delta Pearl. Have a satisfying and relaxing weekend, my chuckaboo!
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Another nail biting finish! What is Dundas up to!?
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We shall see, dear Fraggle. We shall see. 😉 Thanks for reading and commenting, my chuckaboo!
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It getting exciting more and more, another hit dear Teagan, Thank you, my dear friend, I think you are yourself a Heroine 😊💖🤗💖
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Magician, I blush at your kind words.
I’m happy you enjoyed this chapter. There is more ahead, so “hold onto your hat.” Thanks for reading and commenting, my chuckaboo!
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I gather all together in my lamp my dear Chuckaboo.😉 You made my day. 🤗Have a nice weekend my lovely one. 🥰💖🙏
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What’s going to happen now? That’s a cliffhanger if I’ve seen one, Teagan! Thanks for another gripping episode. I hope the book launch tour keeps steaming ahead and Lulu and you survive all that partying. Thanks for letting me host one of the stops. It was terrific fun! 😉
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Thanks Olga. I think Lulu is sleeping in today, LOL. Thanks for reading and commenting, my chuckaboo!
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Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog.
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Adored Ape, I’m so glad you are on this riverboat. Thanks for sharing from your tree house, my chuckaboo!
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🦍🤗❤️❤️🤗🦍
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Reblogged this on ravenhawks' magazine and commented:
Oh my, what is Mr. Dundas up to? Thanks for another riveting Chapter Teagan
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We shall see, Dyanna. We shall see. 😉 Thanks for reblogging, my chuckaboo!
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You are welcome
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