Saturday, December 7, 2019

Welcome back to the steampunk riverboat, my chuckaboos!
Most of you will recall this serial is a rewrite of a novel I wrote in 2016. I wasn’t satisfied with it, so I’m adding to it via this serial. During National Novel Writing Month, I posted a few chapters that did not get a rewrite. However, today’s chapter is all new material.
I only used one random reader thing — Locusts from Jacquie Biggar. I hope you’ll take a moment to visit her blog.
To review Chapter 16 Suffrage, click the link.
This time preparations are starting for Émeraude’s sweet sixteen party.
Thanks to Dan Antion and Faith Antion for the use of their photos.
All aboard!
The Delta Pearl
Chapter 17 — Jump

There it was again — that sooty, smudgy cloud that was never quite where a cloud should be. I could have sworn it followed the Delta Pearl. Although, that couldn’t be, because sometimes it was ahead of the riverboat.
The Dealer knew something about it, I was certain. However, he was keeping his cards close to his chest. The idea that Jaspe was being secretive bothered me even more than that cloud.
Worse, if Jaspe wouldn’t discuss it with me, then none of the senior staff were likely to talk about it either.
I stood high upon the hurricane deck and stared at the sooty blotch that hung in the sky above the riverbank. An unexpected voice at my ear caused me to jump.
“A penny for your thoughts,” Obsidian Durango said into my ear. “Ha! Émeraude, you look like you’ve seen a ghost. “Honestly, I didn’t mean to scare you. But if I’d known it would get that much of a reaction, I would have goosed you too,” the Cadette added amid chortles.
“Ouch!” he exclaimed when I punched his arm, but he was still laughing.
“Sid, you’re such a comedian,” I quipped, drawing back, getting my fist ready to make contact with his other arm. “You’re a regular wag. What are you doing up here anyway?”
He nodded toward the broad red and white stripped awning that was rolled up and waiting to be hung.
“Making sure the fittings are in place to stretch the shade awing across this area,” he commented. “The Cook is snaring every pair of ‘idle hands’ she can catch to help with the decorations for your sweet sixteen party. This seemed like a good chore to appoint myself, before she could have me tying bows or arranging flowers.”
The Cadette was hiding something behind his back. When I leaned to see what it was, he brought out a single hot pink rose with a ribbon bow.
“Happy birthday… erm, tomorrow,” he said.
“Aw thank you, Sid,” I said sweetly to throw him off balance. “You took that from the Cook’s decorations, didn’t you?” I told him as I sniffed the rose.
Knowing my penchant for the color green, Agate had been searching for green flowers ― not the easiest task. I overheard the Dealer recommend hot pink roses. He said they were used to show appreciation and recognition.
Part of me was excited about the party. I wondered if the coming of age event would help the senior staff see me as an adult. Even so, I felt shy about all the attention. My life on the riverboat was somewhat isolated. Agate wanted the party to be open to all the passengers. To my astonishment, the Captain agreed.
I gave an angst laden sigh. My gaze returned to the riverbank and that smudgy cloud.
“Don’t despair, Émeraude. The party will be bang up to the elephant, even without my expert talents used in the decorations,” Sid promised.
He pretended to take offence when I snorted.
“This sweet sixteen thing will be quite the soiree. The Dealer says they’re popular in Europe. It sounds like the Quinceañras my sisters had when they turned fifteen,” Obsidian went on, but I was too preoccupied to listen.
“What do you make of that dark cloud over there, Sid?” I asked.
“Well, I don’t think it will rain out your birthday party,” he said with just enough puzzlement in his tone to keep me from wanting to throw him overboard.

The Cadette leaned casually against the railing as he looked at the odd cloud. I could tell by the way he held his mouth that a sarcastic remark was on its way to his lips. Then abruptly his expression changed.
He looked high overhead where clouds were meant to reside, and then back to the sooty cloud above the shore. Sid’s brow was furrowed when he turned back to me.
“It doesn’t look like weather, does it? Could it be that smog stuff they write about in big city newspapers?” he pondered. “Oh! I know. It’s locusts! It’s a plague of locusts,” he finished with a decisive nod. “Hey! Where are you going?”
I raised a hand in exasperation and turned away. Blue John, the Mate, came out of the pilot house. He made a broad motion to include both Sid and me. Onyx, the clockwork owl, sat on his shoulder. He held a note in his brass beak.
“He’d only give the note to thee, Émeraude. You know he can be a stubborn one. Cadette, it looks like the task of hanging that awning is ourn. Let’s get to it,” Blue John said.
I was glad to see the Mate looking much better than the last time I saw him. However, there was something rigid about his posture, and his movements were tight. I could tell he had not had any sort of miraculous recovery from his over-stressed state.
Caution took over me for once. I wanted to ask Blue what he thought about the cloud. However, I expected he would be as tight-lipped about it as the Dealer, if he knew anything. Worse, if he didn’t know, I was afraid the idea might set off another bout of paranoia. I left my question unasked. Moreover, I made sure I didn’t look at the cloud.
Onyx leaned forward to give me the note. Written in Agate’s hand, it said that she needed my help in the tearoom. That seemed strange. The tearoom was a cozy dining area. It wasn’t large enough for any party. However, my duties on the Delta Pearl included just about anything.

After I read the note, Onyx fluttered up onto the roof of the pilot house. At least the little busybody wasn’t going to follow me. He probably thought he should keep an eye on Obsidian.
On my way to my way to the tearoom, two different passengers stopped me to ask for information or directions. One wanted to know the schedule for shuffleboard games. The other wanted to know about a misplaced attaché case. Then I glimpsed the back of Hyacinth Harvey, so I took the long way around to my destination, to avoid her.
When I got to the tearoom it was empty.
“Agate?” I called, but no reply came.
Thump-thump-thud — two lighter bumping noises were followed by a heavier thump. It was the rhythmic noise I had heard while I chased that brat, Hershel. So, the only thing I knew about the source of the sound was that the boy had not caused it.
Thump-thump-thud.
The tearoom went dark.
I heard the floor creak.
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End Chapter 17.
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Thump thump thud!! Well that can’t be good. 😳
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Hi Jill. Strange sounds worry me. 😏 Thanks for commenting, my chuckaboo!
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I had my suspicions about no one being in the tearoom almost immediately, but that could have come from watching the Geico chainsaw commercial once too often. Nooooo, don’t go toward the chainsaws or the tearoom!!!!
Looking forward to Saturday’s chapter, Teagan. 🙂
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Ha! I haven’t seen the commercial, Mary J, but it sounds like a hoot. Thanks for visiting, my chuckaboo!
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What a way to leave this installment…….the thumping she has heard before and that strange cloud….great work as always!!
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Thank you, Kirt. That means a lot to me, my chuckaboo!
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Talk about cliffhangers! Those pigs really do look like Deme and Honeybell. Have a great week, Teagan – hugs!
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I love that photo, Teri. I’m so glad you enjoyed the chapter, my chuckaboo! Happy new week hugs right back.
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I first thought the thumping might be a surprise party, but Emeraude heard that sound before. The bigger worry is the the cloud. What is it?
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I’m tickled pink that you remembered that, Jennie. 🙂 Yes, that cloud has been lurking around from the very beginning of the story, being noticed once in a while. It’s as bad as my creepy stalkery neighbor! Thanks for being on this riverboat, my chuckaboo!
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My pleasure, Teagan! Ooo… a creepy neighbor 😳.
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I’m very curious about that cloud? ANd it doesn’t sound good for poor Emurade. xxx
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Hi Adele. Ah yes, that cloud. What is it, why is it, and who does it effect most? Thanks for spending part of your weekend on this riverboat, my chuckaboo!
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Now I’m extremely curious as to what’s about to happen. Is it a party or…? Great episode and ending, Teagan:)
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I’m so glad you enjoyed the chapter, Denise. Thanks for being on this riverboat, my chuckaboo!
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You are going to leave us in the dark with Emeraude when there is something ominous afoot?!
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Oops! I didn’t see it that way, Joanne. But then with the light out, I can’t see much either. 🙂 Thanks for spending part of your weekend on this riverboat, my chuckaboo!
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Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger and commented:
Uh-oh, trouble!
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Many thanks for sharing from your place, Traci. I’m happy you’re on this riverboat, my chuckaboo!
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Pleased to be there as well, Teagan!
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Whassup with the tea room going dark and the thumping noise continues! A dark cloud is stalking the Pearl. Crew members are acting weird. And I’m having heart palpitations reading this weeks episode!! Lol.
The Delta Pearl definitely harbors a lot of mysteries, and I’m not so sure they’re all pleasant.
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Hi Ginger. I’m so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for spending part of your weekend on this riverboat, my chuckaboo!
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Niiiice cliff hanger ending!
Yahoo!
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Thank you, my chuckaboo! Hugs on the wing.
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Flying at them, and hugs back!
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Ooh great ending! You built up an ominous sense throughout this episode that makes this a chilling cliff-hanger!
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Holy Hannah! Thank you, Andrea. I really appreciate this feedback. Thanks for spending part of your weekend on this riverboat, my chuckaboo!
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EEEK. A dark tearoom and a floor creak. Gotta be something big. Good episode, Teagan.
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I’m happy you enjoyed it, John. LOL, I should have passed around flashlights with this episode. Happy weekend, my chuckaboo!
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Hahaha. Good idea. Hugs, Teagan
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I love the crazy comments Teagan. They’re nanty narking along with your zany story about cliff-hanging wags, and bang up to the elephant! Quit lollygagging and watch your sauce box!
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We have to watch out, Brad. There might be akruffians hiding onboard. But the Captain is a big guy. We’ll have him batty fang them. Happy weekend, my chuckaboo.
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🙂 🙂
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This segment stopped on an ominous note. That sound is coming from somewhere that leads to nothing good, I’m afraid. I loved the playful exchange between Emeraude and The Cadette. I enjoyed this episode, Teagan, and can’t wait to find the source of that noise!
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Thanks so much, Jan. Ha! It “leads to nothing good” is probably right. Although on this riverboat, who can be sure? Thanks for visiting, my chuckaboo!
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Thanks for putting Hog Heaven on your post. Much appreciated. Summoning notes ending with thumps, thuds and darkness are ominous signs of something… Hmmm. Ominous.
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I hope you get some new visitors from it, Tim. You have such a terrific range of photos and posts at your blog. Thanks for visiting, my chuckaboo.
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Oooh. A cliffhanger. What a place to leave your reader. Excellent episode, Teagan. Have a great weekend. ❤
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It’s been far too long since I stopped with a cliffhanger, Diana. I think I was having withdrawal. LOL. Thanks for being on this riverboat, my chuckaboo.
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Reblogged this on lampmagician and commented:
The magical tour sailing on, all Aboard ❤
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Thanks for using the magic lamp to share The Delta Pearl, Magician. You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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I am happy that my lamp works for you, at least 😉 but without jocks you have deserved it by your great works my dear chuckaboo ❤
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I’d love to work “you’re a regular wag!” into a conversation today. What a suspenseful ending.
As for an object, let’s see, a penny-farthing? A menorah?
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Ha! Can you imagine people’s faces if we threw some Victorian slang into our conversations. It could be fun. Thanks, Priscilla. Hugs.
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Ah-ha, a cliff-hanger at every turn — so it is with the mysterious Delta Pearl.
Frankly, between locusts, rooms going dark and eerie crossings at the border, I think I’ll carry an oil lamp around the deck!!
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That sounds like a good idea, GP! 😀 Sir Reggie sees well in the dark. We’ll make sure he stays close to you.
I actually spent time researching, trying to figure out what kind of lamps a riverboat in the late 1800s to early 1900s might have. I eventually found some info about ocean liners (they had electric lights), but not riverboats. Then I remembered that I had give the Pearl some magical properties. Besides, “what kind of lamp” (in this scene) didn’t advance the story. So I just wrote the actual lamp out of the scene. Happy weekend, My chuckaboo!
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There’s no missing next week’s episode, the way you left us hanging, Teagan. The cloud, the noise, the sudden darkness, I felt a shiver go up my spine.
I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
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Thank you kindly, Dan. I don’t guess riverboats have anything that is comparable to a “sleeve”, but I wonder if the Pearl has something up hers… Thanks for your feedback, my chuckaboo!
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Riverboats have a personality, or maybe they take on the personality of the captain. I wouldn’t be surprised if the Pearl has something up her sleeve.
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Great episode, Teagan! Seems there is a love story going on? Best wishes, Michael
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I’m happy you enjoyed it, Michael. Even though this is a re-write of an existing story, I do take comments into consideration — at least to a degree. Several people have started asking for some romance for Emeraude. I am not a romance writer at all, but I can work with “hints” of romance. The original story has “hints” of what future “romance” Emeraude might have. So I’m bringing the idea out earlier now, and adding some complications. Happy weekend, my chuckaboo!
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😉 Good way, Teagan! Love it very much. Big hugs Michael
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Awesome, Teagan. You certainly know how to end an episode.
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LOL. Robbie, I wouldn’t want to have to give up my title of Cliffhanger Maven. 😉 Thanks for being on this riverboat, my chuckaboo!
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Mysterious! Great episode Teagan.
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I’m happy you enjoyed it, my chuckaboo! Happy weekend hugs, Fraggle.
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Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog.
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Adored Ape, thanks for sharing from your tree house. Happy weekend, my chuckaboo!
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You too Teagan 🦍🤗❤️❤️🤗🦍
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Reblogged this on ravenhawks' magazine and commented:
Great chapter Teagan, the mysterious cloud, thumping and the lights going out can’t wait to see what that is all about.
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It’s high time I started revealing the sources of some of these mysterious things, Dyanna. 😉 I appreciate you sharing from your place. I’m so happy you are on this riverboat, my chuckaboo!
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Looking forward to the reveal.
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Way to cliff hang!
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LOL, I’m hangin’ 10 on my serial surfboard, Barb. Cowabunga! Thanks for visiting the Delta Pearl, my chuckaboo!
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What suspense! The week’s wait will feel very long, Teagan. And the cloud! Love the pigs photo! I can’t wait for next week’s episode! Happy weekend!
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Albuquerque has some wonderful murals, Olga. Tim is great at finding and sharing them. I’m delighted you enjoyed this chapter, my chuckaboo!
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