Wednesday, January 17, 2018
The New Year’s celebration is finally wrapping up, here at Jazz Age Wednesdays. Chris Graham, the Story Reading Ape! collaborated on a story with me that started here. I couldn’t resist keeping the tale going for a few episodes. However, today I present my conclusion.
Part-1 (here) began with Chris’ character, Artie — a genius time traveler chimpanzee determined to meet up with Pip again. In Part-2 (here) we left Artie and Mona being pursued by the police. Now, the conclusion.
Pip and Artie Meet Again
Part 3 — Conclusion
The Christmas tree still stood in the parlor corner. Granny and I had made the decorations for it. I frowned at the strings of popcorn, remembering how many times I stuck my finger with the needle when I made them.
Light reflected on the German-made glass ornaments of which my grandmother was so proud. They were shaped like things from a Nativity scene, although there was one I just couldn’t identify. To me, it looked a lot like a motorcycle, but that couldn’t be right…
The shiny ornaments reminded me of that labradorite pendant I found at the corn maze site. I thought it would look darb with my costume. So, I hurried to my room and took the gem out of my little jewelry box and hung it around my neck.
A loud peal of thunder shook the cottage. I figured Miss Olive’s prediction of a severe storm was about to come true. Then I heard the coppers’ sirens, so I hurried to the parlor window.
Sure, enough it was a police vehicle. A Ford was right behind it. Oddly, I couldn’t see anybody they might have been chasing. Both automobiles slowed and stopped. A tall man got out of the Ford and talked to the officers for a moment. He made broad, frustrated seeming gestures as he spoke.
The man was Detective Dabney Daniels. He headed up the walkway as the police vehicle turned around and drove away.
At the same moment I heard a loud commotion from outside, in the backyard. I felt the need to see what that was, but I knew Granny would have my hide if I didn’t politely answer the door.
I met Daniels at the door and asked what was happening.
“Some hood on a motorcycle got balled up and went the wrong way on a one-way street near Union Station. Speeding too. There was a flapper on the back of the bike. When he headed this way, for a minute I thought the girl might be you. Then I saw she had dark hair,” Daniels said as he took off his fedora hat. “Anyhow, I don’t know how he managed it, but he gave us the slip.”

He finally noticed my attire and looked at me like I must have escaped from the looney bin. People were wild for anything to do with Egypt or the Orient. So, I wanted my costume for the party to be from either one or the other. I finally put together a costume that looked like Dürrüşehvar, an Imperial Princess of the Ottoman Empire.
It bugged me to death that nobody knew who I was.
“I’m on duty,” Daniels began, but looked hopefully toward the hallway. “I can only stay a moment.”
“Everyone is either in the dining room or the kitchen getting food,” I told him. “Go on back and make yourself at home.”
Movement at the corner of my eye caused me to glance out the window again. Cinnamon Bun!
Granny’s Flemish Giant rabbit shouldn’t be out of his hutch, but there he was in the front yard. I guessed that was what the noises I heard out back were. Then I saw two people chasing him ― a man in a suit that made me imagine a formal military uniform from some strange country and a flapper.
(See more about Cinnamon Bun here.)
“Mona!” I cried and ran outside.
“Pip!” my friend exclaimed and hugged me. “I remembered you describing Cinnamon Bun in your letters. I knew your grandmother wouldn’t want him running around, so we were trying to catch him. We ran into his hutch when we… err… when we stopped,” Mona told me in a rush.
Cinnamon sat up tall on his haunches when the man offered him a treat. I could tell the big bunny liked the guy. Then he turned toward me and took off his cap. He grinned when recognition spread across my face.
“Artie?”
“I had to do a mini-jump with my portable time machine to evade the police,” Artie said sheepishly. “When we popped back, we bumped the rabbit hutch. I sincerely apologize. Nothing was harmed, but the door was knocked open, and this magnificent rabbit got lose.”
“Pip, it’s amazing! Who’d of thought I’d meet a talking chimpanzee!” Mona enthused. “And travel in a time machine!”
Artie looked embarrassed. I could tell that he was humble for a genius.
“The time machine still has some bugs in it. It had trouble locking onto the transponder, but I see you found it,” he said with a grin as he motioned toward my labradorite pendant. “So, Mona and I accidentally took a detour to Germany, a decade or two ago.”
Artie gave me a bright-eyed look and in a devil-may-care tone asked me when I’d like to visit. With all of the world and all of history to choose from I was dumbfounded.
“Cat got your tongue?” Mona asked.
“Your costume gives me an idea. Would you care to see the Ottoman Empire and meet the real Begum Sahiba Hatice Hayriye Ayşe Dürrüşehvar Sultan?” Artie offered.
He knew! This talking, time traveling, genius chimp knew who my costume was supposed to be!
“No phonus balonus? We could really go there?” I asked.
He nodded and Mona grinned.
“Granny Phanny will never even know you were gone,” Mona winked and told me.
“You realize of course, that you can’t tell anyone about this escapade,” Artie told me with a regretful expression in his big brown eyes.
“I guess they’d think I was spifflicated if I did,” I muttered. “Okay. Let’s get a wriggle on!”
The End
Horsefeathers! It’s too bad Pip can’t tell anyone about her time travel adventure. I guess that’s why it is not mentioned in her novels! I’ll leave all you sheiks and shebas to imagine the endless kinds of trouble Pip, Artie, and Mona got into for that little jaunt through time and space. Thanks for visiting. You’re the cat’s pajamas!
Now, for that shameless self-promotion… Here are the links to the books about Pip and her friends.
Murder at the Bijou — Three Ingredients I
The Three Things Serial Story: A Little 1920s Story Kindle
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Brilliant ending to the 3-parter! I’ve been retro-fied 🙂
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Hi Christy. I’m so glad you could come back for the conclusion. It was great to have you onboard the time machine. 😀 Hugs.
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Hugs 🙂 ❤
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Great, great, great, Teagan.
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Love, love, love that you could visit, Robbie. 😀 You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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It’s very kind of you to share this mini trilogy, Traci. You’re the bee’s knees!
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I loved this, Teagan. I can imagine the adventures those three had! Great research and very cool to pick the princess (I know I’ll misspell her name if I try to type it) for the conclusion.
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Huge thanks Jennie. Wow… WordPress didn’t even let me know your comment was here… Always something with them. Anyhow, I’m happy you enjoyed this. You’re the berries!
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You’re welcome, Teagan. I’ve had some dropped comments, too. Today I had a dropped blogger, one of my faves! WP is good, but no one is perfect. I absolutely enjoyed your post!
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Great end to a great story!
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Thank you so much, Maja. WordPress didn’t even let me know your comment was here… Always something with them. I’m delighted you enjoyed this. You’re the berries!
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I have finally caught up with you again, Teagan! The time machine sounds like it will be an interesting adventure for Pip.
I know that “Thoroughly Modern Millie” song from grade school. My class put on a Roaring 20s play for the school. Is that Julie Andrews singing in that clip?
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Dear Lavinia, you are so kind to spend this much time at Teagan’s Books. I sincerely appreciate you. Yes, that one is Julie Andrews. How fun that you did the play as a kid! That’s pos-i-lutely wonderful. 😀 Hugs to you and Rick and all the kitties at Salmon Brook Farm. ❤
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I remember the little blue and white flapper girl dress my mother made for me. That was a fun play!
Hugs back to you and Crystal! 🙂 ❤
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If anyone else had an introduction that included the words: “a genius time traveler chimpanzee” I would turn the virtual page and move on. This story was amazing, Teagan. You and Chris made a great team, and thoroughly enjoyed this mini-series. Get your wiggle on and enjoy the Ottoman Empire.
Thanks too for the video. That and this story are the perfect way to get my Thursday in gear.
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I’m tickled pink to hear that, Dan. Right now I’d settle for an “ottoman” to put my feet
up. That video is one of my favorites, so I’m happy you enjoyed it. You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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A little bit of Julie Andrews was a perfect ending. Another great Pip story and fun to have Cinnamon Bun reintroduced 🙂
Try to stay out of the looney bin today, Teagan. The weekend is almost here.
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Cinnamon Bun was so fun to write about. I’m happy you enjoyed this — and the video is one of my favorites.
Applesauce, Joanne! They might as well take measurements for my straight jacket. Can I at least have it in a pretty color?… But the day is finally nearly over. Wishing you a wonder-filled weekend. You’re the berries!
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With my kind of luck, I’d get a straight jacket in plaid – red plait, to make it worse … and then put me in a room lined with mirrors so I can’t escape the image 😳
Thank you for the wishes of a wonder-filled weekend! That is the best kind of wish … as long as I’m not left wondering what the hell went wrong 😉
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Joanne, you’re such a riot. Your market post had me in stitches (with an occasional gag reflex)! 😀 (I’ve been wondering what the hell went wrong ever since I moved here in 2008.) You slayed me with the plaid straight jacket and mirrored room — that would be my worst nightmare. I hate mirrors! They’d give me the plaid jacket in chartreuse with floral pants in orange. (Eek, Gag! Oh the horror of the reflection! Oh the humanity!) Then it would snow again.
I’m so glad you made time to visit. Hugs!
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Ahhh – it’s always good to laugh early in the morning. It helps set the tone for the rest of the day 🙂
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Brilliant ending, Teagan!! x
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You are so kind to comment, Judith. Thank you. You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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Love being the cat’s pyjamas…oh look different spelling in our countries (of course we also call them ” jim-jams,pyjies, jamas, P.J.s etc.etc.) Funny language!! xx
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How fun! I haven’t heard jim-jams or pyjies, but we use PJs too, and jammies (not sure of spelling).
The differences can be a hoot, Judith. When I was about 11, a particular style of trousers was very popular here. They were calf length and gathered at a cuff below the knee, like old fashioned golf pants. The only name I’ve ever heard for them was (drum roll) knickers. My (also 11 years old) English pen pal and I were discussing fashion and I mentioned how badly I wanted a pair of knickers. She of course, was horrified that I didn’t have any. 😀
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This was fun, Teagan – like a reverse Planet of the Apes time travel!
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I’m tickled pink that you enjoyed it Teri. Well then… you might like an old serial “Copper, the Alchemist, and the Woman in Trousers.” They end up in a strange purple (yes… i really said purple) world of ape doppelgangers. No… I have never done hallucinogenic drugs. LOL. Huge thanks for visiting and for all your support. Hugs!
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Delicious ending to a real fun series Teagan. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Needs to me more of this in future!
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What a pos-i-lutely darb thing to say, Paul. I’m tickled pink that you had a good time with this mini series. More? We’ll see… perhaps from time to time. Oh! No pun intended. 😀 Hugs.
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Flappers seemed to be a potent mix of innocent and sensuous, Mona fits the bill perfectly! Poor Artie, now that he made that offer to Pip, he’s going to rack up some serious Air Miles, lol
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Haha! I think you’re right about the miles, Jacquie. I had not thought about flappers that way, but I can see what you mean. I do like the fun-loving, whimsical image I have of them. Do I see a Roaring Twenties romance novel in your writing future? 😀
Heartfelt thanks for visiting. You’re the bee’s knees!
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Oh boy. Off to the Ottoman Empire. Yikes. At least Pip is dressed for it! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
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I think Pip thought her costume was pos-i-lutely darb, Diana. This concludes the mini series though. Further adventures for Pip, Artie, and Mona on the time machine will be left to the reader’s imagination. It was huge fun for me and I’m glad you came along for the ride. Hugs.
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I thought maybe this was the end based on your final note… just hoping. 🙂 It was posi-tootly fab-u-licious!
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LOL. I’m flattered that more seems to be the popular consensus. I just don’t know where I’d find the energy. 😀 Lovely joint post at your place. I really enjoyed it. Hugs.
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I understand. You have a lot going on!
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So THAT’S why Artie is going around grinning (and disappearing) every so often…
At least he minds his manners 😄
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Hahaha! Yes, Artie is quite a gentleman… chimp… sheik? Thanks for collaborating on this tale, Chris. It seems to have been a great hit. You’re the cat’s meow!
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You’re a great storyteller, Teagan – MFH🤗Gs
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As are you, my friend. Mega hugs right back.
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Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog and commented:
The finale of THIS particular adventure? 😎
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And huge thanks for reblogging!
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My pleasure, Teagan – Great Tale 🤗🤗🤗
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I can only imagine the wacky adventures they had in the Ottoman Empire! Great success with your little mini-series with Chris, loved it! xoxo
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Thank you from my heart, Kathryn. I’m so happy you could climb onto this time machine. It wouldn’t be the same without you. You are the berries!
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I can imagine all the adventures of Pip and Artie. I think you should write them because your imagination is so much better than mine. Thanks, to Chris and you for the super story.
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Now, I don’t know about that, John (imagination)! 😀 But thank you. The thing is, I’d feel wrong about taking over Chris’ time travel idea — even though, with his amazing generosity, I know he wouldn’t mind… but that’s not the point.
I’m tickled pink that you enjoyed this mini series, and truly appreciate all your support.
I called in today with a snow headache, but even though I took leave, I’ll save your Story Day for my lunchtime treat. Can’t wait to see the latest about Lucas and the cougars. Hey… that could be a subtitle. 😀 You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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Snow headache is the best. Stay warm today. Hugs
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Ooooh, how exciting. I’m glad they escaped the coppers and Pip is totally stoked about doing a little time travel. Excellent!!
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😀 I’m happy you could climb onto the time machine, Jan. I guess Detective Daniels will be scratching his head… Huge thanks for taking time to visit. You’re the cat’s meow!
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The video is a great way to cap your story and the adventures of Pip, Mona and Artie. Like many others, now I’m ready for my own spifflicious madcapped time travel adventure. This story is the bees knees. Thank you Teagan. Write on! 🙂
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Brad, thanks so much for visiting — and cheering me on with this lovely comment. I’m happy you could climb onto the time machine. That video is a favorite of mine, so good for lifting the mood. You’re the cat’s meow!
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And you’re the bomb! 🙂
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Bwahaha… If you only knew how close I can come to exploding with all the crap I face in Mordor, you’d understand what an apt description that is! 😈
Thank you kind sir. ❤
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A delight to read as I return to my reader today Teagan and I will have to confess.. I could do with hopping into that time machine and backtrack a couple of months as I endeavour to catch up with your beautiful writing skills..
So loved the name of your Detective.. All the D’s
And can not even begin to pronounce the name of the Sultan at the Ottoman Empire 😀
And loved Thoroughly Modern Millie.. Can just see the Charleston 🙂
Have a super duper week as you fly here there and everywhere. Now where is that Transporter Machine again????? 🙂 Zooooom.. Gone!
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Sue you are such a delight. I’m happy you could climb onto the time machine! Oh, the alliterative names… that was a bit of whimsy I carried through all of Pip’s serial stories. It all began with episode 2 of the first serial. I only knew a couple of people in the blog world, so at first getting “3 things” to write about was a challenge. I saw a blog challenge that included occupation names (ballerina, fireman, movie star)… so I added the characters’ occupation to the alliterative naming game.
As for the sultan — me neither! LOL. I avoid difficult names, but try to add a bit of history now and then. Thanks for taking time to visit. You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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Meow… 🙂 😸😻 she said as the cat licked her whiskers 🙂 Have a super day Teagan.. xxx ❤
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Fun chapter! I want to be a fly on that bike when they travel back in time. Too bad I won’t learn about that adventure anytime soon. 🙂
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Hi Deborah. I’m tickled that you enjoyed this story. Oh, I could have had so much fun, writing about Pip’s time travel adventures. I almost did, but it would have turned into an entire, full-blown serial and I’m already doing one (Thistledown – Midsummer Bedlam). I don’t have that kind of energy. Hmmm… but maybe after the faery story finally concludes… Thanks for climbing onto the time machine. You’re the bee’s knees!
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🙂 Fingers crossed for you to write that serial!
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LOL, thanks Deborah. Hugs.
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Kind thanks for reblogging, Michael. I hope you are having a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs!
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Reblogged this on Smorgasbord – Variety is the spice of life and commented:
It is Jazz Age Wednesday and the third part of the story cooked up and executed with style by Teagan Geneviene and for this particular adventure, The Story Reading Ape.. A New Year’s costume party is in full swing but of course with Arti the time travelling chimpanzee, Pip and her friend Mona, things are going to go with a bang….
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Many thanks for reblogging, Sally — especially with this fun intro! You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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Pleasure Teagan.. hugs xx
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Huge thanks for reblogging. Have a wonderful Wednesday!
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Same to You dear and a wonderful Weekend 😉❤
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This was a grand ending for the stiry. And ‘spifflicated’ was a favourite word of my Mum, and I haven’t heard it since she died until today! Nice memory for me! 🙂
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Hi Fraggle. It really means a lot to me that I could bring up a happy memory for you. 🙂 They had such marvelous language back then. So much more fun than the slang we use now. I appreciate your feedback about the ending. You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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Good Wednesday morning dear Teagan….and thank you once again for a superb chapter and conclusion. I love the video and can well imagine the capers that Pip, Artie and Mona got up to 🙂 Hope you and Crystal enjoy a lovely day and that the creative juices continue to flow xxx.
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Hi Janet, it’s so good to see you. Thank you for this comment. that’s what I aim for with this kind of ending — for the reader to continue more stories in their mind. Have a wonderful Wednesday. You’re the cat’s meow!
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And so are you, Teagan – the cat’s meow…:) Hummingbird hugs. Janet xxx
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Hummingbird hugs right back, dear friend.
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Great episode and great video. Thanks, Teagan! (I wouldn’t mind some time-traveling in future stories either) 🙂 Happy Wednesday!
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Oh really? (The time travel) I was concerned that I might be over using it. But maybe the only other one was In the Pip of Time… Great feedback, Olga — I’ll keep that in mind. Thanks for taking time to visit and for sharing on FB. You’re the cat’s meow!
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Oh I love that video of the flappers. Thanks for this stunning mid-week delight.
Huge Wednesday Hugs ❤
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It’s wonderful to see you Christoph. That’s one of my favorite videos too. I used it in a post years ago, but this time I had to dig hard to find it again. I’m happy you were able to access it. You’re the bee’s knees!
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Reblogged this on ravenhawks' magazine and commented:
Oh, that was a great ending!!
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I was so worried about the end. Wheew…! I wasn’t sure how well that would be received, Dyanna. Huge thanks for reblogging. Have a wonderful Wednesday. You’re the cat’s meow!
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A hood on a motorcycle with a flapper on the back going the wrong way sounds a bit like some of my misspent youth
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Hahaha! I had forgotten about your motorcycle days, Tim. I’m glad you could climb aboard the time machine. Have a wonderful Wednesday. You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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