Dance of Discord Conclusion: Episode 11

Saturday, July 5, 2025

Mansion people outside bright mauve sky Teagan via Night Cafe

Yesterday was “Independence Day” in the USA.  Considering the setting of this serial, it seems like the appropriate moment to conclude the story — even though that timing was simply serendipity.  Yes, we’ve reached the end of this dance.  Thank you for being part of the story.


This time there aren’t links to previous episodes.  We’re at episode-11 and that would be cumbersome.  However, if you read the ending, and if you notice the twist, you’ll want to go back and confirm that I really have left at least one hint in every chapter.  That will be much easier with a searchable e-book.  So, I’ve made one, and it genuinely is for your convenience — I’m literally making pennies off it.  Of course, if you’d rather go to the blog category I made for “Dance of Discord” and access individual episodes, then you’re also welcome to do that.  Now the answers to any questions you might have about the story are at your fingertips.

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Previously, Milo, Quick accompanied by Duchess Felina Gattone, went to the Belgian ambassador Baron Rogier Dessain, where they were greeted by his personal secretary, Enno.  Milo questioned the baron about his connection to Miss Zola Jouret.  The baron was furious and ready to vouch for her.  Then they went to confront the amber-eyed woman herself.  As Milo was grilling her about her involvement in the shooting of the Argentian ambassador, we heard movement behind a curtain.

Dance of Discord: Conclusion

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In that instant, all movement seemed to freeze.  I stared at the heavy draperies that covered the doorway to an adjoining room.  Milo Quick’s animated features had held an indecipherable mix of determination and… disappointment.  His countenance was motionless, but I saw a flicker in his eyes.  I wasn’t the only one who heard that slight sound — Milo heard it too.


Did Zola Jouret hear it as well?  She also held perfectly still.  However, her amber eyes were firmly fixed on Milo, holding his gaze.  It reminded me of a snake willing its prey to not look away.


Is she the python Kaa, mentor of the boy Mowgli of Kipling’s The Jungle Book?  Or a serpent with more sinister motives, like the one in the book of Genisis? the fleeting thought crossed my mind.

“Isn’t it a curious situation, Mr. Quick?” Miss Jouret remarked after a moment as she sat back down in her chair.  “You, Mr. Quick being with the Secret Service of the United States… and I, Zola Jouret being a secret agent of Belgium, together here — one accusing the other of a crime,” she paused briefly, tauntingly.  “And perhaps with good reason.”


“Miss Jouret, where is the handgun?” Milo repeated undeterred, his lips tightening into a line.  “If you were anyone else but you!  I couldn’t be upfront with someone else—  If you had been anybody else, I would have placed you under arrest the minute I entered this room.”


Did some emotion dance in her strangely colored eyes?  If so, then I wasn’t certain that I was familiar with the feeling.  Then that infinitesimal flash in her eyes glided away.  Perhaps it was the hypnotism of the snake I had considered an instant earlier?  Whatever the case, she smiled and inclined her head.


Je comprends,” she murmured pleasantly.  “For the reason that you are Mr. Quick of the Secret Service, I will tell you the truth.  Yes, I did take the revolver.  I took it because I knew who had fired the shot.  Please believe me when I say that person did not act with my knowledge or consent.  Do you believe me?” she asked, sounding eager to convince him, and it seemed like a long moment indeed before Milo nodded.


“Also, Mr. Quick, the gun is beyond your reach and so it will remain.  I assume that according to your laws I am an unwitting accomplice to this unfortunate crime.  I accept that as my own misfortune.  However, that does not change the fact that I will keep silent.  If I am to be arrested then, Lo que será, será, as my friend Señorita Silva says when she loses money at Bridge,” she stated with a little flutter of her hand, although she studied his face with hopeful expression.  “Tell me… Am I to be arrested, Mr. Quick?”


Milo swallowed, but if I could have heard the beating of his heart, I was sure it would have been steady.  Oddly, despite Miss Jouret’s pleading eyes, I suspected that her heartrate also maintained an even rhythm.

1904 Edwardian woman running away with gun by Teagan via Night Cafe

“Did you take the document?” he asked, shifting his stance when she glanced away.  “Where is the paper that was taken from Señor Gómez when he was shot?”


“I don’t know,” she replied seeming innocent, and sounding matter-of-fact.  “Am I to understand then, that the motive for shooting the Argentine was to obtain that document?” she asked and received a barely perceptible nod.  “Then yes.  The one who shot Señor Gómez did obtain the document.  Now, please, am I to be arrested?”


Milo’s chest expanded with a silent breath.  A touch of his dandified pretense returned to his posture.  His tone became nonchalant.


“Might I inquire, Miss Jouret, just what was the purpose of the message you sent with your fan in the ballroom?”


“You understood the code?” she exclaimed in mock astonishment.  “You read that?”


“What about the man who read your unique code?” Milo started, and I immediately thought of the American lawyer to the Germans, Adam Adler, who had assisted in her supposed faint.  “Perhaps he shot the Argentinian diplomat?”


Tsk-tsk, Mr. Quick…  Perhaps,” she taunted, then rose, and calmly faced him.  “Am I to be arrested?” she asked again taking a step closer.


“You are forcing me to arrest you.  Why?” Milo asked in the lackadaisical manner that I knew he used when he was in fact at his most serious.


“I hoped to get his assistance on behalf of a foolish young friend, a young lady with too much fondness for the game of Bridge, and too little sense about gambling,” was all she said.


“You mean the Colombian diplomat’s daughter, Señorita Olivia Silva?” he asked, earning a surprised look from the lady.  “But that doesn’t explain the shooting.  Where is the revolver?”


Milo stared at her silent face for a moment longer.  Then with reluctance that surprised me, he took her by the arm and formally stated that he was arresting her for the attempted murder of Señor Alejandro Gómez, ambassador to the United States, for the country of Argentina.


As Milo spoke, the heavy draperies covering the doorway behind him rustled and then parted.  Milo Quick stood motionless, with his hand on Miss Jouret’s arm.

Blond man in parlor with gun by Teagan via Night Cafe

“You asked about a revolver,” a man said.  “Here it is!”


“Nom de Dieu!  Don’t!” Miss Jouret shouted.


Milo found himself “finding” the revolver from the barrel end.  The hand holding it wore a gold ring that was intricately engraved with a Belgian crest.  Nonchalantly, his eyes lifted to the heated gaze of the man who held the gun.  He was young, younger than Milo, and he was fastidiously dressed.  He was familiar, but his dire expression altered his features so much that at first, I didn’t recognize him.


Enno, the Baron’s personal secretary! I thought.


“Yes, I made some inquiries about a certain revolver,” Milo cut in before the Belgian could work himself into even more of a lather.  “Is this the weapon?” he added, casually raising his hand.


Noticing a single bead of sweat on Enno’s forehead, I chose my moment.  Leaping from my chair, I pounced onto the table, using it to increase my momentum.  Claws extended, I flew into Enno’s face.

tabby cat n falling blond man in parlor by Teagan via Night Cafe

Quick as his name, Milo’s fingers closed around the weapon.  Enno fell backward, with me still attached to his face.


Zola Jouret exclaimed in concern amid the man’s wails of mostly fear, because I had not scratched him.  Well, at least not too badly…


“You must let Miss Jouret go free,” Enno said in a surprisingly courteous manner after Milo extracted me from him.  “I am the one who shot Señor Gómez.  I am also an agent of the Belgian government, and I am better able to defend myself than Miss Jouret.  She is telling the truth that she had nothing to do with the shooting.  She took the weapon and escaped because it belongs to me,” he explained.  “Just please keep that animal away from me,” he plead, prompting me to add an angry hiss as a warning.


The Belgian agent took a sealed envelope from his jacket.  I smelled the dry blood on it and recognized it.


“This is the document that was taken from the Argentine.  It is the original compact, with signatures from half of the representatives of the bloc.  Señor Gómez… shall we say, needed additional persuasion,” Enno continued.  “I would not have shot him, you understand.  As I was about to… to persuade him, he attempted to take my revolver.  Ultimately the gun fired.  I am unsure whose finger was on the trigger.  You may take the document with my compliments.”


Enno gingerly touched the scratch that I had landed half an inch away from his eye.  He glared at me.  In return I gave him a fierce stare, and wrapped my tail to hug it protectively against Milo’s head.


When I gave a low growl in reply to Enno’s stare of challenge, Milo put a steadying hand against me.  He twined his fingers into the sturdy gold chain on the back of my Bolero jacket.  When Lord Elgin had it made for me, he had said that an ordinary harness simply would not be good enough.  He had the most sought-after dressmaker in town create a harness to look remarkably like a little sleeveless Bolero.


Slowly, Milo released his grip on Zola Jouret’s arm.  He shifted me up onto his shoulder, where I took my place guarding him.


“The members of the bloc began leaving the city within moments of the revolver being shot.  Most of them are already on ships leaving the country,” Enno said with a smirk.  “You’ve won the day, Mr. Quick.  The compact will not be signed today, but this dance is not yet finished.”

Edwardian 1904 Man n tabby cat on shoulder in parlor by Teagan via Night Cafe

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The sun broke through the clouds, after an interminable week of rain.  I was curled up in my favorite wingback chair, basking in the golden rays as Milo Quick gave his report to Chief Drummond.  When Milo came to my part in rescuing him, I stretched and then sat up straight, in order to better view Stuart Drummond’s reaction.  His thick white moustache began to vibrate with what I thought must be pleasure.  Then a loud “Ha!” burst from his lips.


“Your main objective in the unlikely task of dissolving the bloc, had been to at least make sure their compact wasn’t signed in the United States,” Milo was saying and the chief nodded, but continued to watch me with a bemused expression.


“We haven’t gotten any further reports on Miss Jouret?” Milo asked of the amber-eyed woman who had seemed to disappear like mist after Enno was apprehended.


Shaking his head, Stuart Drummond stood.  He moved across the room and bent down to scratch my cheek.


“I wish I had seen you in action, Dutchess.  The Secret Service will give your home back to you now, take away all the strange furniture, and the noisome comings and goings of strange agents,” he told me, and I leaned into the scratching.  “Try to keep Milo Quick out of trouble.”


I gave my tail one thump against the chair in agreement.

Dutchess Felina Gattone with Milo and Drummond, composite image by Teagan
Composite image by Teagan

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The End

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 So, there’s the twist.  I hope it surprised at least a few of you. Although… perhaps some hints were very subtle if one has not had a “Duchess Felina Gattone” in their life.  Heartfelt thanks to everyone who gave me “random reader things.” I’m sorry that I didn’t get to all of them, but I came pretty close.  I appreciate everyone who followed this serial.  Thanks for coming to the dance.

 Friendly comments are welcome.  Hugs!

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52 thoughts on “Dance of Discord Conclusion: Episode 11

  1. Chickie told me the Duchess was a cat during the first episode. She thought you were writing a story about her, and she kept asking me, “What am I doing now?” She wants a bolero jacket with a gold chain on it. I told her, “When you save my life from a Belgian spy, I’ll get you one.” She’s on the lookout.

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    1. I’m so happy you liked it, Jennie. Yes, cats are smart (and occasionally very stupid, but that’s why we have to take care of them). Although the loyalty of the fickle felines is often debated. 😉 (Don’t tell the Scoobies I said that!) But they can certainly be very protective too. Many thanks for following along. Big hugs.

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  2. Yeah you got me. Yes your clues told me many things about the duchess. I was surprised she was a beautiful cat. But of course, who else could she be? Well done, Teagan. All the best on the published version. Hugs.

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    1. Aw, thanks, John. I really didn’t expect to surprise you. Thanks for picking up the e-book. Thanks for the good wishes too, but I really did make it as a convenient thing for those who were interested. Frankly, the book versions of these serials never sell enough for money to justify the effort. They’re more of a “thank you” from me than anything else.

      I hope the fireworks (if there were any close enough) didn’t upset the girls yesterday. Hugs to you and yours.

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  3. Well, the Duchess is the hero, really. A feline Miss Marple and Poirot rolled into one.

    Miss Jouret was too, obvious. I figured Enno, but was torn between him and Mr. Quick… a twist that woud have out twisted “The Twist”.

    This was a fun serial, Teagan. THANK YOU!!!

    It must feel great to finish another story!

    Hugs all around! (and a little carpet scratching to celebrate!)

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      1. Aww! You are a nice softie!
        Misha was declawed by her former owner. It still breaks my heart!!
        However, she found a corner of the carpet in the gown room that is oddly reinforced. She brings it up with her fake claw movements, and it makes a loud – pat tap pat tap pat as it hits the ground. She is quite happy about it.

        I am too, but it still breaks my heart.
        Tap pat tap pat tap pat to you and the Scoobies! Hugs!

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        1. It’s so cool that Misha has a spot where she can get that kind of satisfaction for that instinct. Velma has the very strong instinct to cover any remaining food. She can make such a mess doing it! (Or dig/cover for an extra long time in the litterbox sometimes.) It’s such a strong need in her that I try to be patient. LOL, sometimes I have to try awfully hard. Cats really are the best.

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  4. In retrospective the name should have given it away. For me the one clue that did not make sense at the time was the gold chain on the bolero jacket. I kept thinking gold braid would have made more sense. Fine and surprising ending. Bet the Scoobies thought it the only fitting conclusion.

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    1. Haha. There were other places where I thought my “hints” might have readers thinking “Teagan doesn’t know much about _____.” But I didn’t take myself very seriously and kept rolling with it. Although Edwardian Era jewelry was very opulent and often included long strands of pearls or chains… so I gave myself a pass on that detail. Thanks for following along. Hugs.

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  5. Love the ending, Teagan. I suspected what kind of excellent creature the duchess was from the beginning. Gato and feline (gato in Spanish is…, well, I won’t say it in case people read the comments before reading the episode), and it did remind me of some of your stories with fabulous protagonists. I love her role in the ending. I knew she was a heroine from the word go. And thanks for the bookerized version! I intend to read it again as soon as we get a cooler day and my brain can focus on writing a review. (We have rain forecasted soon, so there’s hope)! Big hugs and love to the Scoobies, who must have loved this story as well. ♥

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    1. Thanks so much, Olga. Yes, that is part of why I thought you might figure it out right away. I was actually looking at Italian names when I found Gattone. Then as the story evolved in my mind, I took out the Italian parts… but I liked the name so much that I kept it.
      Many thanks for being part of this serial. Hugs.

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  6. I must have missed several hints, Teagan. Early on, I did wonder about this possibility, but somewhere along the line, I put the thought out of my mind. The serial was very well done. I like the way it ended, and I enjoyed the twist. You kept me engaged throughout, and if Milo Quick returns to action in the future, I would be happy to follow. I hope you are having a wonderful Independence Day weekend. Give those Scoobies a scritch from me.

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    1. Thanks, Dan. Yeah… I thought her name was a gigantic give away, and I expected to reveal that twist after just a few episodes… but nobody mentioned it, so I started talking about the hints/clues and a twist, and just rolled with it.
      I might move forward with a novel version, with a different ending and a lot more twists along the way, but that story isn’t on my priority list. Happy extended-Fourth to you and yours too. Hugs.

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