Saturday, December 23, 2023
It’s wonderful to see you in Atonement, TN and reading this serial. Whether you love the holidays and are happy that it’s only a couple of days before Christmas — or if you’re glad it’s finally almost over, I hope you’re having a wonderful holiday season, with joy to in your world.
Geoff Le Pard, author of wildly imaginative limericks and stories, left a mindful “soundtrack” offering with a Joni Mitchell song — Both Sides now. Geoff commented that with Pepper’s near miss with death, she had looked at things from both sides. It turns out he was right.
Ahead
This episode brings us back to the unconscious Pepper Riley and the pondering of Maudie Rocket.
Previously
“We’ll have to leave their safety in Cade’s hands. I hope he doesn’t abuse the situation,” Bheema added.
Deme’s bright blue eyes bulged worriedly. She took a breath and then hurried back toward the boathouse.
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Episode 2 — Both Sides Now
Pepper
Inside the boathouse, dust motes glittered on sunbeams. With the abrupt whooshing of a blanket being shaken out, the specks danced furiously. Spike leapt and twirled just like the dust motes, trying to catch the blanket. Distantly, I wondered where Maudie had found it. Looking down, I watched her tuck the blanket around my unconscious form.
It didn’t occur to me to be concerned, although I felt bemused to realize that I was somehow looking down at myself. I was still me, there on the boathouse floor. Yet, I was at the same time, me — astral, autoscopic me, and somewhere else.
A little piglet that glowed softly in the shadows. Somehow, I was sure she was one of the three from the parking lot of the Rowdy Rooster, when that disgusting biker tried to run over them. Then I remembered seeing the same pigs the night I arrived in Atonement, Tennessee.
The streets had been deserted. I considered running the light, but then a small pale figure darted across the road. It was followed by two more. They were so fast that I didn’t get a good look at them.
It must have been dogs, I had told myself.
While I waited for the light to change, I cracked open the window. I heard the sound of grunting and snorting. Grunt-grunt snort-snort repeated several times. In my imagination the grunts and snorts started to sound like Wel-come Pep-per, wel-come Pep-per.
My focus returned to Maudie, who was crouched down beside the pig. Surprisingly, they were talking — both of them.
“Maudie Rocket, put some of this in your ears, just to be safe,” the pig’s voice drifted up to me.
“Eew! Deme, as long as you’re sure it’s just wax,” Maudie commented to her.
Their conversation continued for a moment, but I didn’t pay attention. It was hard to keep my mind on any one thing, because I felt the attraction of so many distant places and people.
Maudie nodded a final assurance to the pig. Belatedly, I wondered what had brought such a whimsically magical creature to the boathouse. However, the pig had already scampered away.
Sounding far away, as if through a mist of clouds, I could hear Maudie’s voice. She shook her head saying I had changed. It felt like a strange thing for my best friend to say.
“Still warm at least…” she murmured in a forlorn voice as she put her fingertips to my forehead. “Pepper, I’m sure you’re in there somewhere, still alive. I know you died for a couple of minutes when that arrow hit you. But right now, I’m starting to think that you just decided to go back… Back to wherever souls go,” she sniffled and wiped her nose.
I looked down curiously at her form bowed over my motionless body. Her dyed blonde hair was in disarray, something she would never allow.
“Pepper, we’ve been best friends all our lives. All our lives, I thought you were the strong one, even though you said that I was,” she went on and shook her head again.
“But you’ve changed… Through any give and take, good and bad, every time you managed. You found a way to cope. Even if coping was to deny all the weird shit that you and I could always see… Stuff nobody else could see. You bore the burden of pretending to be normal. While I, on the other hand, pretended that I understood. I embraced being ‘flighty Maudie’ and the oddball shit was part of my personality — or so everyone thought,” she wiped her eyes and gave a derisive snort.
“Ha. I pretended myself right into the arms of a sugar vampire, and then I was the cause of you coming here. I know you inherited things from Uncle Salty. You were close to him, when I never was. But if it hadn’t been for me falling for that sugar vampire, you would probably have handled all the legal stuff from Uncle Salty’s will through a lawyer and never come her yourself. So, it really is my fault,” she muttered with another sniffle.
Maudie’s tone altered from self-recrimination to hope. She seemed to entreat my spirit to return. Although I still felt the desire to leave.
“Pepper, this place — it’s enough to make anybody dizzy, but it feels like every fairy tale comes real. And you… you’re just in denial about all of it. Like you think it’s an illusion. Like it’s just a show, and you’ll leave them laughing when you go,” she said and sighed.
“I know you gave up your career. You couldn’t keep pretending to be like all the snobs and posers that were around you. I can’t imagine how unhappy you must have been. I get that you think you’re a failure. You lost things and people that you cared about deeply. But what did that song say? ‘Something’s lost, but something’s gained, in living every day.’ I know we lost Uncle Salty here, but despite that, Atonement seems like a place where you have everything to gain — if you’ll just open up and let yourself!” she added with anger in her voice.
I watched as she put her hands on my shoulders and shook my body.
I felt sad for my best friend, my cousin. Other than Uncle Salty, Maudie was the only one in the family who understood me. We understood each other.
Still… it’s better to stay here. I don’t feel the wound, and I don’t feel that other kind of pain either. Better to feel nothing.
However, her remarks pricked at my soul, a nagging truth I couldn’t ignore. As I looked at my life from both sides, I knew Maudie was right.
Yes, I had changed — I lost the fighting spirit I once had. Life was too much. All my struggles had been pointless. However, that realization did not bring me back to my body. Instead, I nestled down farther into the security of that strange between place where my mind had gone. I no longer saw Maudie, or my own motionless form. The soft darkness was comforting.
After a while, I heard Maudie and a man whose voice I didn’t recognize. They both called my name. They called insistently, but I felt quite distant from their voices. The sound of my name made me want to move even farther away. I didn’t want to go back.
Then I became aware of violin music. The notes slid down the scale and vibrated at the base of my spine. It was as if the notes were a hunter, tracking me. I felt the music’s touch and with it, the bottom dropped from my stomach as it spun me around like a Ferris wheel, dizzily dancing. I tried to pull free, but the music yanked me up through feathered canyons, through clouds that streamed like flows of angel hair.
I felt my wounded chest and my devastated pride, and with it the tears on my face. All my fears reverberated anew, pounding in my heart.
Flickering open, my blurry eyes beheld robed a form leaning over me. A dark hood shrouded his face. However, his amber eyes sparked from that shadow, latching on to mine, preventing me going back to the between place.
I tried, but I couldn’t look away from his strange eyes. Gasping from a jolt of pain, I struggled to swallow fear and to breathe.
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I love to hear from you, so friendly comments are encouraged. Merry Christmas. Hugs!
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Don’t go to the light, Pepper! Fantastic episode, Teagan. Hope you and the girls have a great weekend!
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I’m sorry it took me so long to get to this – Christmas got in the way! But it is like a Christmas present – so lovingly written and you learn so much about Maudie. Pepper has to fight – to get back – she’s got it in her!
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You’re never late here, Noelle. I hope you had a good Christmas.
I think it’s more like she’s being dragged back. 🙂 But yes, she’s going to have to fight. More on that, going live at midnight tonight. Her battles might not be what we expect. Hugs.
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Great descriptions of where Pepper is at, Teagan.
But she has to come back! I just know she will.
Cade will make her…I hope!
Hugs!
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Thanks so much, Resa. I think Cade’s violin has snared her, but with what consequences? We shall see… Given the calendar, hopefully before next year. 😉 Hugs winging back to you.
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HUGS!
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There’s a lot between the lines in this one. Have you ever had an out-of-body experience? I wonder how much control you have over coming and going. Perhaps you always need some kind of force to bring you back. The perfect song for it too. (K)
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Actually, yes… a few. Although they were very long ago and *not* from a near-death experience. I know there was at least one in adulthood, but the only one I remember clearly happened in childhood. Rather, they were connected to something extremely emotional (bad or good). Each happened extremely quickly and without trying to create it. I was just in both places at once. There was no issue of going back (or trying to), I just did. Thanks for reading and commenting, Kerfe — and for the conversation. Hugs.
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My goodness, that is one of your best episodes, Teagan! That in-between two places tells us much about both Pepper and Maudie. Bravo!
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Why thank you so much, Jennie. I appreciate your feedback. Big hugs.
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You are welcome, Teagan. Mega hugs to you!
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Incredible episode that flowed magically and seamlessly. Could really feel and see both sides of Pepper’s delimma. Should she stay or should she go? Wonderful Christmas present. Hope yous is equally magical and marvelous.
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You are so kind, Pat — thank you. A wonderful Christmas to you too. Hugs.
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Sending you Lots of Love along those violin strings… May the Music of your stories forever be in tune…
Happy Christmas Teagan.. and All the best for the New Year xx ❤
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What a wonderful, beautiful comment, Sue. Heartfelt thanks — and the same lovely wishes back to you. Hugs. ❤
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❤ xxx ❤
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Wonderful! ❅🎅*⋆⍋*✩ ᙏeᵲᵲყ Ϲ♄ᵲ𝗂ꝸʈ𝓂ɑꝸ ✩*❅*⋆🎅⍋
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Thank you kindly, Cindy. Merry Christmas back to you and everyone at the Holler. Hugs.
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What a fantastic episode, Teagan. That’s the best Christmas present ever!
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Thank you kindly, GP. Love the Christmas eagle. Big hugs.
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Haha!
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What a powerful episode, Teagan. Learning more about Maudie and Pepper was good. More importantly, you perfectly described what I would imagine would be the soul’s conflict when the decision to stay or go arises. Also, a great job of capturing” his strange eyes.” I hope you have a Merry Christmas. The description of Spike jumping on the blanket is one I have seen many times with our kitties when trying to make a bed. There is no way to stifle a laugh when that happens. Thanks for that memory.
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Wow, John. Thanks very much for that specific feedback.
Haha. All of my past cats have done that with blankets or changing the sheets — except Velma and Daphne. They did it a couple of times… LOL however, they quickly learned that when one was completely covered by the blanket — the other would fly in for the “attack.” So that might explain it. 🐱 Merry Christmas wishes back to you and yours. Hugs.
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I was moved by this episode. Pepper’s desire to stay in the in-between place is so strong.
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Thanks for this lovely comment, Liz. …The allure of a place that feels safe.
Have a good pre-Christmas weekend. Hugs
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You’re welcome, Teagan. I definitely felt that allure of safety. So far, so good with the pre-Christmas weekend!
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This is an incredible episode, Teagan. I think you captured the notion of seeing life from both sides, and you captured it very well. I want Pepper back, but I understood her wanting to stay where she was. Like Olga said, I love that you used this scene to share more about Pepper and Maudie. Very well done! I hope you enjoy the week ahead.
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Thanks, Dan. I realized it was a way to bring out the characters without slowing down the story too awfully much. I’m happy you liked it. I hope it’s a good week for you too. Hugs.
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Wonderful writing Teagan, so poignant. Have a lovely Christmas xxx
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Thank you kindly, Fraggle. Merry Christmas to you and your too. Hugs.
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I love the scene with Maude and learning more about the relationship between the two. And I agree with TanGental. A very moving piece. Have a lovely holiday, Teagan. Big seasonal hugs!
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Thanks very much, Olga. A lovely Christmas to you too. Hugs winging back to you.
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That’s an extraordinarily poignant piece, Teagan and I’m delighted to be linked to it. I think you’ve captured perfectly that sense of ‘both sides’ in Pepper’s dilemma. Have a delightful Christmas and here’s to more visits to your happy place: Viva Atonement!!
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You’re too kind, Geoff — thank you. Haha, yes, here’s to that quirky little town. Merry Christmas, and hugs.
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I hope no one leaves you an unfriendly comment! And may there be lots of joy in your world 🙂
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Thank you, Tandy — and the same good wishes to you. Hugs.
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