Saturday, November 18, 2023
Hello, everyone.
Before I get to the point, we do have a response to the creativity challenge. It’s from fellow author Geoff Le Pard. Don’t miss his is hysterically Ruthless response. Be sure to check it out.
Anyway, you aren’t mistaken — I was late publishing this post. I’ve been banging my head against the (usually) figurative wall, trying to write. It’s not lack of ideas. Not lack of inspiration. My “stuff” has been in the way, big time. That’s just the way it is.
I got past the title issue. The new title actually gives me some structure for the plot of Part-2. Atonement, Bad Bishop. For a “bad bishop” situation in chess, the position of friendly pawns prevent the bishop moving. That gives me all sorts of story ideas.
And yet, here I sit… I wasn’t going to do a post today. Then I was thinking about the musical-magic of the new character, Nix, and I suddenly remembered how many times my story-writing gets fueled by a mental soundtrack. So, a moment ago after prolonged and excessive meowing demands from Velma for attention, I started this post, inviting you to share your own musical ideas.
The right song really sticks around in my head, even years later, when I think of a story. Often the song comes first and brings the story along with it.
So, to those of you who know the strange little town of Atonement, TN and its odd inhabitants, tell me what songs make you think of the town. What song makes you think of a particular character? What about the jeweled chess pieces — do they make you think of music?
If you’re new, then try to imagine this quirky, magical little town, infested with supernaturals. What kind of song do you think of with it?
You know my main purpose in blogging is to engage the readers — to make you part of the creation. Be sure to leave a comment mentioning a song that makes you think of Atonement, TN. Hugs.
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You have collected some great suggestions here, Teagan. I love reading the comments as well as your blog. Geoff and John are hilarious! Here is my song pick, Stuck in The Middle With You by Steelers Wheel. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ln7Vn_WKkWU
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Clowns to the left of me, jokers to the right? Hmmm… that could be an interesting plot line, Darlene. 😀 Thanks for reading and commenting. Hugs.
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I don’t know why, but the first song that came to me was Everything Little Thing She Does is Magic by The Police. I liked seeing all the suggestions – you got some good ones!
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Oooo, that’s a good choice, Teri. Thanks! Hugs.
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I can’t really offer a song suggestion but I think it’s beautiful how the most random of things can bring about the most amazing inspiration! ❤️
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Thanks for visiting, Samantha. I agree completely. Although, random is difficult for most people, I thrive on it, even though that really isn’t such a good thing. It’s just the bizarre way my brain works. 🙃 😄 Have a great week. Hugs
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Teagan, your writing–its depths–show the effects of long involvemenr in a craft.
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You are so kind, David — thank you. I hope all is well in your world. Hugs.
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Yes “I’ve seen all good people”
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Definitely a good fit, Kerfe — and the first (maybe the only) song to be mentioned twice. It does let me expand on a scene idea that has been trying to germinate. Many thanks for commenting. Hugs!
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I saw that Dan had mentioned it after I made my comment. Glad if it helps.
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Duplicates are fine — it’s like voting. Plus, it reinforced an idea the song gave me for handling a relationship between two characters that I had not previously settled on how to bring it into the story. This gave me a different and more interesting idea. 😊
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Some great songs here that work. “Black Magic Woman” by Santana popped in quickly, but I’m not sure who that really is in you story.
Now it’s The Eagles “Hotel California” https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=09839DpTctU
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Great minds think alike, Resa. 😉 Although “Black Magic Woman” has been in my head since the late 90s for a different unfinished novel. It’s too deeply rooted in that story for me to reuse it. “Hotel California” just might take me somewhere — even if I can never leave. LOL. Hmm… seriously though, that might work for Old Green Eyes, or maybe as a dark past for one of the good guys. Hmmm….
Thanks for commenting. Big hugs.
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Hugs back!
“Witchy Woman”… Songs are cascading. I leave now!!
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Haha. I love the cascade, Resa. ❤
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Itchycoo Park by the Small Faces https://youtu.be/fayL1WTR1Go
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What a fun song. I didn’t know that one. Thanks for the cool video. Hugs.
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I loved the Smsll Faces as a teen.. innocent days!
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Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds by the Beatles https://youtu.be/naoknj1ebqI?feature=shared
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I always liked that song, Geoff. Hmmm… I’ve yet to reveal the nature/identity of the good guys’ pawns. They’re pretty fearsome and downright gross, but somehow in my twisting mind, that song works for them. (Bheema’s “secret identity” as Ganesha, they are ganas.) Hugs!
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Ha! The truth will out!
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Both Sides Now by Joni Mitchell https://youtu.be/aCnf46boC3I
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What a wonderful song. (I find Karaoke therapeutic, though my cats disagree that it’s just me caterwauling. That’s a fun one to sing with all the changes and ups and downs.) I like the idea for this story. Unexpected, but it works. Maybe a sentimental moment for Pepper, since she just went to the “other side” when she was almost killed.
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It reminded me off those gear change moments you jolt us with occasionally, making the reader think more
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That’s wonderful feedback. Thank you. ❤
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Strange Days by the Doors? https://youtu.be/eZWB0VF2vDI?feature=shared
I’ve a couple more but I’ll send separately or they’ll end in spam!
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That’s thoughtful of you, Geoff — thanks. Ha! That’s a good one. The Doors tend to put me in a weird place anyway. The 1991 movie gave me bizarre nightmares of Andy Warhol. I woke up screaming. Yes, I’m strange. LOL.
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No you’re not. I had a Morrison poster at Uni but soon realised I couldn’t love with his eyes. They ‘read’ me… even rolled up. I gave it to the Catholic priest who taught philosophy and was a tutor in hall. He loved the Doors and said, after the Seminary, nothing scared him.
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Haha! That’s too funny.
The only good thing about that nightmare was that I was dreaming that if I could scream loud enough, then someone would save me from Andy Warhol. So I woke up screaming. Scared the crap out of my psycho ex-husband, and then I went back to sleep. (I had screamed so I was safe. LOL) Psycho-ex on the other hand, fell out of bed terrified. Ah… the moments worth remembering. There actually are a couple.
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Always good to milk the positives out of any dire situation.
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Maybe because of Pepper’s hair color, Cinnamon Girl by Neil Young keeps running through my mind. Looks like Part 2 is moving into a new more vigorous phase. Can’t wait for the gang to return.
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I always liked that song, Pat. Since Annie likes to serve customers home baked cookies at her antique store, maybe it’s a song for her. Hugs.
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That’s a good idea, Teagan. Happy Thanksgiving. Hugs.
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Hi Teagan, it’s always fun to see a post from you. Here is my contribution – White Rabbit by Jefferson Airplane https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WANNqr-vcx0 It has an interesting meaning too: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/White_Rabbit_(song)
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Great song choice, Robbie, especially with the chess element. I always liked the weirdness of that song. My favorite Jefferson Airplane song was “Somebody to Love.” Powerful vocals from Grace Slick. Yes… terrific song for the story. Many thanks and big hugs!
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I hope the songs help, Teagan. I had writers road block for 18 months with the radium girls. I’d given up on it entirely when the answer came last week. Now I just have to find time to write it…
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Ah… so many stories… so little time. I know.
I was so glad to read that you were back to work on that story. You had so much work and thought invested in it. I have a block on my Wheel of Fortune story, from a few years ago, but that’s because I was (semi-secretly) writing a happier childhood for myself, letting the heroine be sort of me. It was too personal.
With this serial, it’s not exactly a block. It’s just that all my “stuff” keeps derailing me. I do think the songs are going to help. I have lots of idea flashes in my mind, flitting around like autumn leaves falling. Take care.
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I am delighted to know that. I know about stuff – as you know Greg suffers from PTSD and OCD. It flares up and we struggle for a while until it settles down again. He is very brave to face his fears so well most of the time and so are you.
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Perfect, Robbie!!
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Promise you won’t laugh, Teagan, but I’m hearing an off-key music box.
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I’m only laughing at myself, Noelle. I think you’re hearing my metaphorical music box! Seriously though, an off-key music box is actually a terrific “thing” for the story. There’s something inherently creepy about them. Big hugs.
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I see Jennie also thought about Rodgers & Hammerstein, because the first thing that came to my mind was ‘Bali Ha’i’ about the magical island in South Pacific, so here it comes. I’m off to check Geoff’s post. Good luck and I hope you get plenty of inspiration, Teagan. And love to Velma and Daphne.
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I’m intrigued, Olga — thanks! I loved what I know of Rodgers & Hammerstein, but other than being familiar with the title, I didn’t know Bali Ha’i. I see a Youtube video right now, that mentions a Bloody Mary character. Maybe she could be the Wendigo!
Thanks for sharing the post. Daphne & Velma send you loud purrs. Big hugs.
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I thought of Olivia Newton John’s “Magic”.
https://genius.com/Olivia-newton-john-magic-lyrics
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Oooooh! I like that idea, GP. That one really clicks with me. A great theme for Pepper. And the “I’ve always been in your mind” lyric is very similar to something I would have Nix saying. (The powers of a nix include great strength, music, and telepathy.) You were tuned-in, my friend. This might have started my mental wheels turning! Big hugs!
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Thank you and I know you’ll make it work!!
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I’m not that musically inclined. And there is no need to Blog if your real life needs attention! Or is taking precedence.
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Hi, Tandy. Despite everything, blogging gives back something I very much need (in my unique circumstances and disabilities). So I persevere. Many thanks for reading and commenting. Wishing you a lovely new week. Hugs.
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How about Enchanted by Taylor Swift.
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Oooh, thanks, John. I admit that I’m not current on music, TV or much of anything. I like Taylor, but wasn’t familiar with this song. It works well with the story. The official video is beautiful too, and atmospheric. Terrific choice. It might create a relationship for Pepper. Ah… but which? 😀 Big hugs.
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I thought it might work but, of course, you would know best. Hugs back.
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get you, on trend you ol’ Swifty…
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Maybe the oldest.
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but I’m sure the Swiftiest…
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When I hear the call of ice cubes.
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Haha! You two are killing me. Something weird triggered a panic attack a little while ago, so I answered the call of a martini. I even used my Magellan Blue Iris gin. My new favorite since Roku went up to $185 a bottle. Although Magellan seems to be taking that course too.
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I always rely on gin to help me out of tight spots. Of course, I have to be careful that the gin isn’t the cause of a tight spot as well. Hugs, Teagan.
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Haha. True enough. In all seriousness, (and maybe it’s just to me) gin really does help me with an anxiety attack (even an under-sized serving). Other forms of alcohol don’t do the same thing. Maybe it’s the herbs… Cheers.
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Ah I will have to leave you to your mutual sousing. I gave up alcohol in 1989 and while my father fought a Sterling rearguard to persuade me it was merely a fad and would eventually go the same way as Betamax videos and sock suspenders, I have held out since. So what gin tastes like is one of the mysteries of the universe to me, up there with the aerodynamics of the bumble bee and the button fly.
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No it isn’t just you the botanical ingredients in Gin are very effective in their calming properties.
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While on Liz’s Cream theme, I go with “Tales of Brave Ulysses”. I love the graphics.
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Thanks, Tim. There’s some gorgeous stuff at Lexica.com. I’ll look up that song — thanks. I only remember a handful of songs from Cream, but I loved Eric Clapton with them and Stormy Monday. I got hooked on it when I lived in Albuquerque and commuted to the west side, playing it over and over, while I focused on different elements of it. Wonderful as the vocals and guitar are, I was awed by the bass. Hugs.
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Let me know what you think of Tales of Brave Ulysses. It’s one of my favorite Cream songs.
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I’ve used up most of my Internet time for today, but I’ll check it out. I really can’t imagine the song. (I had to resort to T-mobile Internet, a horrible dishonest scam, and it’s very little Internet for a lot of money. But something is “wrong” either with this house or the exact place where it sits. I can’t receive much of anything.) Looking forward to checking it out.
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You don’t have Comcast cable down there? I’ve had Comcast for three years now and it’s fast, reliable and reasonably priced.
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Great song choice, Tim! I just now listened. The lyrics are a great way for me to see the resolution to the missing boy, Donny Metatron. Thanks!
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You are welcome, Teagan.
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I’m so glad to know music fuels your writing. Well, music is universal and pierces the heart and the brain simultaneously. How electric! Hans Christian Andersen said, “Where words fail, music speaks.” What songs come to mind? From Rodgers and Hammerstein’s Carousel, “When you Walk Through the Storm”, Glenn Miller’s “In the Mood”, and “Walk Right In, Sit Right Down” by the Rooftop Singers. Hugs!
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Oh, Jennie, that is so profound — “music pierces the heart and the brain simultaneously.” Beautifully said. Those are great songs. “In the Mood” always puts me in a positive mood, and I haven’t thought of “Walk Right In, Sit Right Down” in ages, but I liked it a lot. Hmmm… the nix (new character) has strange slit earlobes according to lore, so he probably hides them with long hair. The “baby let your hair hang down” part of that song would be fun for him. Hugs winging back to you.
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So glad you liked my music comment, and enjoyed the songs that came to mind. Best to you, Teagan!
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Happy Thanksgiving, Jennie.
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Happy Thanksgiving to you, Teagan.
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I love the idea of having a soundtrack to go along with stories, I always have music in mind when I write, and very often when I read. So, I’m going to offer two songs. The first song is a song I thought of when reading ‘Atonement in Bloom’ – I realize the theme behind the lyrics don’t necessarily match, but I think music is a good fit. Electric Light Orchestra – “Strange Magic” – https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Wtj59opWKg
As for the chess pieces in the current serial, my mind goes straight to Yes – “I’ve Seen All Good People” – https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WfgPEh2J9aI – I have loved that song since it was first released, and “Move me on to any black square” means we’re talking about a bishop.
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Ah ha! Thanks for the chess tip, Dan. I didn’t know that. Oooh… as I listen/read the lyrics, “I’ve Seen All Good People” really works for Pepper and Bheema, particularly with the karma reference, considering who Bheema really is.
“Strange Magic” is great too. The lyrics don’t *not* work. It’s a terrific general fit for the story. I didn’t know it was part of an animated movie from 2015 until I started looking just now. Very cool. Many thanks, Dan. Hugs.
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I’m glad they work for you. Those are two of my favorite bands.
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Great minds…I just suggested Yes as well. (K)
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Ha! Good choice, Kerfe.
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For the song, I’ll go with “Strange Brew” by Cream.
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Tee-hee! Love it, Liz. That’s great for Adelle and her teas and visions. Terrific choice. Hugs.
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Oh, wonderful, thank you, Teagan!
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