Wednesday, October 25, 2017
Welcome back to Jazz Age Wednesdays. In celebration of Halloween, I have another new 1920s tale with Pip and company. This time I let search engines guide me to three random things to drive this story ― first Google, then Yahoo, then Bing. I typed in “Halloween,” hit enter, and used the first thing that caught my eye at each. The three things are: candy, fields of fear, and children holding hands.
Pip in the Field of Fear

As an autumn breeze whistled through the trees as I left the candy store with a white bag of lemon drops. A young man with a motorized bicycle caught my eye. I couldn’t see his face, but I knew only one person who had a contraption like that ― Hank Hertz. He had a passion for all things electronic, especially radios. He was such a wiz at the stuff that it earned him a place as the youngest officer of the Savannah, Georgia police department.
Hank loaded all sorts of mystifying gadgets into the basket on the bicycle. He jumped when I walked up behind him and asked what he was doing. Of course, that made me grin.
“Paisley Idelle Peabody,” Hank grumbled, trying to sound authoratative. “I might have known.”
“Are you making another radio, Hank?”
“Yes. No. Well, not exactly,” he stammered. “I’m working on something for a charity thing the department is doing for Halloween. You know how people like to scare themselves this time of year. They’re going to have something like a haunted house, but it will be outside. I’m going to rig up some radio speakers and make noises to scare people when they get to spooky parts. I hope it doesn’t rain,” he added with a suspicious look at the sky.
“That sounds like the cat’s meow,” I said encouragingly since Hank always seemed like somebody who could use a little extra praise.
“We’re going to call it Fields of Fear,” Hank enthused. “The chief owns a farm on the outskirts of town and he said we could use it.”
“I thought he lived over on King street,” I commented. “It must be nice to have enough mazuma to afford two places.”
Hank made a face and nodded. Then he looked at all the electronic gadgets and grinned.
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Hank and Detective Dabney Daniels built a platform hidden in the branches of a big oak tree. From there they ran wires for speakers to four different spots that Hank could see from the hiding place. One speaker was placed behind a skeleton. When anybody stopped there, either Hank or Dabney would use a deep voice as the skeleton speak to the people.
Applesauce! You should have heard the shrieks! They did the same with a jack o’ lantern sitting on a hay bail and a bed-sheet rigged up like a ghost. Gaffers and bluenose old ladies were like children holding hands. They screamed, and then they hollered with laughter.
Granny Phanny and some other women approached the ghost. The whole thing was worth it to see the look on Phanny Irene Peabody’s face. (Yes, my grandmother and I have the same initials.) Detective Daniels showed he was an old foggy in the making though, and made me stop laughing so hard. But when he turned his head, I couldn’t help busting out with another laugh.
Unfortunately, the ghost stopped working not long after it got a scream out of Granny Phanny. At least we still had the skeleton and the jack o’lantern.
Long about 11:30 that night the coppers decided to call it quits with the shindig. While Daniels helped Hank lug the radio stuff down from the tree, I started spooling up the wires.
The “ghost” sat in a heap atop a hay bail. It had been held up better than that. Maybe the wind was to blame, but I didn’t remember any strong gusts. Hank caught up with me when I reached it. He wanted to figure out what went wrong with it before I took the speaker wire.
“Bushwa!” Hank exclaimed, startling me since the expletive was so unlike the mild-mannered kid. “The wire isn’t connected.”
“Wouldn’t that be why it stopped working? If the wire came loose,” I offered.
“That’s not what I mean. The wire’s completely disconnected. The screw’s been loosened and the wire is all the way away from it,” he explained puzzled.
In the distance I heard the clock at the Independent Presbyterian Church strike midnight.

“The sheet’s got a wire hooked to that tree,” Hank told me as he motioned to the ghost. “I’ll climb up and get it.”
I gasped. I could have sworn the crumpled ghost twitched. Then I saw that the wire at its “head” wasn’t attached to anything else. I grabbed Hank’s arm and pointed, because the cat had my tongue.
The white sheet moved again. There wasn’t any doubt about it ― the sheet really did move. The ghost slowly rose upright. It reached out to grab Hank. He shrieked like a banshee.
Hank caught ahold of my elbow and started to run. However, the ghost had already grabbed me! I screamed nearly as loudly as Hank.
I tried to run but the ghost had a tight hold. Detective Dabney Daniels came along and we started yelling for him to help.
“Shoot it!”
“Yeah, just shoot the thing before it kills us!”
“Shoot it? But ghosts are already dead,” the detective stated with infuriating calm.
The ghost started shaking. I was terrified to think what that could mean. I could feel it quaking because it held me that close to its… Body? Did ghosts have bodies?
I screamed again when the ghost cackled with laughter.
Detective Daniels bent double. Had it attacked him too, through some kind of spectral magic?
Then I realized the copper was bent over with laughter. The ghost let go of me. Finally, I caught the cackle and recognized it.
“Granny!” I yelled.
My grandmother threw off the white sheet, still laughing uproariously.
“Pip… If you could just see the look on your face,” she said, gasping for breath between laughs.
Daniels returned to his nonchalant manner.
“The apple, or in this case the pip doesn’t fall very far from the tree,” he remarked.
The end
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I hope you enjoyed this little ditty with Pip.
Have you visited author Teri Polen’s Bad Moon Rising event? Leading up to Halloween, author Teri Polen hosts Bad Moon Rising. It’s her yearly celebration of suspense and horror. Each year more than 30 horror/thriller indie authors are featured throughout the month of October on her blog, Books & Such. I was there earlier this month! Click here and say hello*!

In honor of Bad Moon Rising, through October, I’ve priced the Kindle version of my debut novel Atonement, Tennessee at just $1.00.
Now I engage in more shameless self-promotion… Here are links to the books about Pip and her friends.
Murder at the Bijou — Three Ingredients I
The Three Things Serial Story: A Little 1920s Story Kindle
Thanks so very much for visiting. You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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I enjoyed this Halloween story about Granny, Teagan!
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Lavinia, you are so very kind to play catch up here. I’m happy I could entertain you with Granny. You’re the cat’s meow!
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Don’t mess with Granny! Enjoyed this, Teagan.
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LOL, I think Granny got her point across, Teri. 😀 I’m happy you liked the tidbit. Huge thanks for visiting. Hugs.
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This is a great read on Halloween – and beyond! I like your creative way of picking out the 3 things for this installment, Teagan 🙂 Hugs and be safe on this special, fun, and spooky day!
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Thank you kindly, Christy. Have a spook-tacular Halloween! Hugs.
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You too!
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Indeed this is great Halloween inspirational of joy – bring happiness and great day of celebration. Such great and creative!!
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Hi Mihran. I’m so happy you enjoyed this little story. Have a wonderful week. Hugs.
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Truly delicious tale Teagan and lovely lovely illustrations that complimented it so well!
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Thank you kindly, Paul. You’re the bee’s knees!
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No Teagan that honour has got to go to you for the magical haunting story and its beautiful window dressing- I am a sucker for those old classic illustrations. All of it gorgeous!
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Reblogged this on Smorgasbord – Variety is the spice of life and commented:
I normally reblog Teagan Geneviene’s posts shortly after they are posted but last week was hectic offline as well as online and I was derelict in my duties.. however, timing is everything, and last week in Jazz Age Wendesdays, Teagan had Pip enjoying a Halloween shindig which involved an electronically manipulated ghost.. or was it…. another great halloween post #recommended
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Dear Sally, there is no such thing as late here. And a reblog is appreciated any time.
The hectic germ is going around! You’re the cat’s meow!
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Thanks Teagan.. hugs xx
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Great story for Halloween….I was picturing all of it and laughing as if I was there!! Perfect!!!
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Your laughter gave me a big grin, Kirt. Heartfelt thanks for taking time to visit both posts. You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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A lovely new edition to this tale, Teagan. Have a great Sunday.
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Thanks, Robbie. A lovely new week to you as well. Hugs!
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Reblogged this on Musings on Life & Experience and commented:
A jazz-age story by Teagan Geneviene.
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Dear Suzanne — thank you so very much for reblogging. Great big hug!
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You’re most welcome for the reblog, Teagan. A great big hug back to you. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Happy Halloween! Great Story!
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It’s great to see you DeBorah! I’m delighted that you enjoyed this little tale. Happy Halloween hugs!
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Thanks. Hugs to you also.
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Great story Teagan. You should get dressed as a writer for Halloween.
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Hi Valentina. Glad you enjoyed it. 😀 LOL, I’m not sure if a “writer” costume would be my normal clothes, or my nightgown!
Have a thriving Thursday. Hugs.
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The writers I know are people out of the ordinary. I will thrive today, thanks for the good wish, I will be speaking today about colors. Happy, happy.
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Oh, that will be a terrific event, Valentina! I love your sense of color. Wishing you a golden weekend!
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Thank you Teagan, I will make the best of it.
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Reblogged this on ravenhawks' magazine and commented:
Totally awesome Teagan!
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Hi Dyanna. I’m delighted you enjoyed this little ditty. You’re the cat’s meow for reblogging. Hugs.
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Loved it
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Well thank God they didn’t shoot Granny, lol! Wonderful short story! 😀
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Hi Kathrine, it’s great to see you. Ha! Pip and Hank were making such a racket in my head — I’m not sure which of them hollered “Shoot it!” first. Have a thriving Thursday! Hugs.
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This is what I needed tonight Teagan, I loved it. Have fun on Halloween, hugs,
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Hi Gerlinde. I’m so happy I could help you finish off your day with something fun. Halloween hugs!
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A great Halloween story, Teagan. A pip of a story! 🎃
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I’m delighted you had a good time visiting here, Jennie. Have a thriving, hug-filled Thursday!
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Best to you, Teagan!
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Pip tells a tantalizing tale ~ posilutely tickles me pink 🙂 ♥
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LOL. I’m delighted you enjoyed it, Tina. Thanks for taking a moment to visit. Hugs.
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Hugs, Teagan ❤
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LOL! Loved this little story with Pip!
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Hi Deborah. I’m delighted you enjoyed this little ditty. Have a thriving Thursday! Hugs.
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Oh I am enjoying Pip’s adventures! I’m pacing myself and only reading a chapter a day…sometimes skipping a day to make the Murder at the Bijoux last a bit longer.
This little short story was a fun because I had just met the character Hank Hertz the day before! 🙂
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You’ve made my day with this comment, Deborah. Now I’m having a thriving Thursday! (Been fighting a bad headache all morning, so thriving was questionable.)
I love the serendipity about Hank!
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I hope your headache goes away and you have a lovely Thursday! xx
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Thanks for this fun little tale, Teagan. I love the way you work in some of the phrases from days gone by. APPLESAUCE!
xx,
mgh
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Hi Madelyn. The Roaring Twenties was such a fun era for language! I’m happy you enjoyed this. Have a thriving Thursday! Hugs.
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Thriving – what a lovely word.
xx, mgh
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Thrive on, Madelyn. 🙂
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Ditto!
xx, mgh
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Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog and commented:
😱 Ghostly Goings-on, in Savannah, Georgia 😱
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Thanks so much for reblogging, Chris. You’re the bee’s knees!
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🐝🐝🐝❤️
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I love grannie! I hope my grandson thinks I’m half as funny 🙂
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A grandma? You? I wouldn’t have believed it, Jacquie. But I’m sure your grandson wouldn’t trade you for the world. Pip, however, might disagree about how funny Granny Phanny is. 😉 LOL.
Thanks so much for taking time to visit. You’re the cat’s meow!
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It’s never a dull moment with the 2 Pips around 😃
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Haha! I believe they may be 2 of a kind, Joanne. They just haven’t figured it out yet. Thanks so much for visiting. You’re the berries!
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Excellent story, Teagan. Makes one want to have an old-fashioned Halloween celebration
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Wouldn’t that be fun! Thanks for taking time to read and comment, John. I hope this week has been better for getting the repair contractors into line. You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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Hugs, Teagan.
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Fantastic episode. I Lolled out loud. Love Granny Phanny.
Huge Hugs!
C.x
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Christoph, you gave me a huge smile with this comment. Thank you. 😀 I’m delighted that I could make you laugh. You’re the bee’s knees!
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Fabulous! Good for granny Fanny. She’s a firm favourite of mine! Have a great Wednesday, dear Teagan.
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Heartfelt thanks, Olga. I’m delighted that Granny has a friend in you, Olga. I really appreciate you taking time to read and comment. It has been a long hard climb to the top of this midweek hump for sure. You’re the cat’s pajamas!
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Hilarious and harrowing halloween haydown. Kudos Teagan.
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Happy to be harrowing in a hilarious way this Halloween, Brad. 😉 Huge thanks for reading and commenting. You’re the bee’s knees.
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Bee-uitiful! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Many thanks for reblogging, Michael. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs!
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Awesome, Teagan. Good thing nobody listened to Pip and shot it. 🙂 Great story for the holiday. 😀 😀
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Your comment is music to my ears, Diana.
LOL, yes, that’s a good thing! Pip and Hank got in my head, frantically screaming, “Shoot it!” I’m not sure which of them started the plea first, but I couldn’t resist using it. Thanks for visiting. Hugs.
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I love starting my day with a cup of coffee and a little Pip.
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LOL. 😉 I’m glad I got it posted early this time then. Last week I forgot Wednesday was Wednesday. Thanks so much for making this part of your morning, Dan. Hugs.
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Wednesdays are easy to forget (or perhaps we’re hiding from them).
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Horsefeathers… I would like to have hidden from this one! And the rest of the week too. Maybe Thursday…
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I was planning to hide from Thursday and Friday, but it’s supposed to continue raining, so I might as well work 😦
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LOL. Right now, I’d take the rain. Without an umbrella. Well, maybe if i take just a few minutes… in a fetal position under my desk…
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And now I have a meeting to attend all morning tomorrow 😩
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Ugh! What did you do in a past life to deserve that? Well… I’ll hope for the best and wish you a thriving Thursday anyway. Hugs.
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Thanks Teagan. I think it’s that time I fell asleep in Sunday School.
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Haha fab halloween story!
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😉 So glad you enjoyed it, Fraggle. I’ll try to catch up with you during my lunch break. Time to head to the office now. Have a wonder-filled Wednesday. Hugs!
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